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Some Leech


I...I am a monument to all your sins...

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Any hints for finding the cover art?

9195077
KevinSano on derpi or E621 should help you find it!

9195084
"artist:kevinsano, shining armor" turns up 60 results for me (edit: and may turn up more in the future); was hoping for more terms to narrow it down, or maybe an image ID.

(Edit: But thanks. And (now) thanks for the PM.)

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search 'gleaming shield', 'artist:kevinsano'... Sort by score, it's the tenth image

Some Leech, you spoil us. Thank you! 😂

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Thanks! I hope you stick around! :yay:

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All your stuff is great, I’ve enjoyed it all. 👌

awesome I absolutely loved every bit of it, I can't wait to see what you will come up next with this.

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Thanks! Already got the next installment plotted ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) out in my head.
It may be the final story in this series, but I can't say for certain.

I am somewhat confused. Did you change the part in the first story where Twilight cast the Want-it-Need-it spell on Shining? Because if not, this series becomes a whole lot darker.

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That wore off long ago and was basically used as an initial push to allow him to let go of his inhibitions.

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Still kind of sketchy, tho. gives off vibes of the whole "Not if they enjoyed it" argument, which I find particularly repulsive.

On the other hand, this is porn. I probably shouldn't take this too seriously.

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Well, as the author, it was in my head that Shining was always interested in trying this stuff, but simply to reserved and/or scared to. The initial push basically kicked everything into motion so, as far as I'm concerned, it's all gravy.

Maybe I should have made that a bit clearer in my previous publications of the series. :fluttershbad:

I don’t understand why you have these as seperate stories instead of as chapters in one story.

If I may...

Princess Celestia had even granted the Shining an extended leave

Unexpected Stephen King.

one of the princess’s personal curriers had placed it directly in his sister’s hooves

Currier and courier are quite different occupations.

Sitting through she was,

Though?

his his

each each

9195993
Well, initially I wasn't sure if I'd even make additional chapters.
As time went on it, much like my life, kinda went out of control, so I just made them individual little stand alone fics. :trollestia:

9195084
Luke, use the ID #~~

Well, damn. I wonder if Shining will get to sit in her throne again, and how long Twily will be able to hold off on testing that cushion :trollestia:

Oh, a guest eh? Maybe a certain pink Alicorn will finally find her One True Cocksleeve :raritystarry:

I really love your work! I just hope that Shining won't be turning into a complete mare now, will he?

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I believe that’s the ultimate goal as depicted by this part of the story.

She was sure that the memory of this day would stay with her for the rest of her life, especially given the fact that it would be the moment hailing the loss of her brother and birth of her sister.

Looking forward to the next story! You never disappoint when it comes to hot clop.

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Aye! Well, not my cup of tea. But still, a lovely story!

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I don’t understand why you have these as seperate stories instead of as chapters in one story.

It's because the author is driven only by the amount of followers he can get. If it was all one story, he wouldn't get nearly as much time in the feature box. The sad truth is this guy writes rushed stories for fame, nothing else.

9197079
Actually, I write these for fun.
Let's look at the facts, shall we. I don't have a patreon or ko-fi account, the "fame" gets me absolutely nothing, and, as stated previously, I'm unsure with some of these if I'll write follow-up stories at all.

Hate to disappoint you there little fella, but them's the facts! :raritywink:

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I don't have a patreon or ko-fi account

Just because you aren't e-begging doesn't mean you aren't craving fame.

I'm unsure with some of these if I'll write follow-up stories at all.

You could still consolidate all of these one shots into one story and just mark it 'complete', leaving a note in the description letting people know it might update. Posting each chapter as a new story just reeks of desperation.

You could still consolidate all of these one shots into one story and just mark it 'complete', leaving a note in the description letting people know it might update. Posting each chapter as a new story just reeks of desperation.

That would be a disservice to my readers and an awful decision.
Some of my stories get a follow-up, some don't. It's just that simple.

While I appreciate you taking the time to comment on something, it's uncalled for to call out an author for "seeking fame."
I work a full time job and just do this for fun, take it or leave it.

One could argue that you're the one craving attention by throwing accusations around about a content creator. :trollestia:

Is Cadance ever going to want to check up on Shining at all? She might be in for quite a shock!

Why keep making seperate stories instead of just making multiple chapters of one continuous story?

Can't wait for the next chapter/story in the series. Very good so far!

Asseccion? Or Ascension?

Or assension if you want to keep the pun. :trollestia:

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No need to be so anal about it. :rainbowlaugh:

Not bad but I think you could have put in a few more descriptions of Shining. What did he look like in armor and how did the dress fit him. Since it's so important you should describe it in detail.

“You know, have some lucky stallion or dickmare fill your womb. Watching as your pregnancy begins to show, your breasts swelling as they fill with milk,” she breathed hotly, causing the stallion to pick up speed. “You just have to earn it…” she concluded.

Maybe you should have put this before Shining is penetrated. That it's sort of a challenge to take the monster dick. It would present it as some sort of final challenge in his journey from colt to mare. Also I do think Celestia would make it clear to him that it will make him a permanent female. I mean as much as he wanted it, it still feels somewhat underhanded to do something like this without his knowledge.

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I'll bear that in mind, for any similar future works! :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, you could have improved it by putting more focus on his 'growth' in addition to the sex.

I would think Twilight would use some kind of shrinking spell on her dick. To make it smaller in order to make daily life easier.

Nice stories but i need to know is there followup to this one

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What a great finale!

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