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Some Leech


I...I am a monument to all your sins...

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Hopefully, there will be another sequel to this where twilight and her mom find a gender changing spell with cadence, and together, they decide to change him to a her and breed him/her hard, until shining is well and truly knocked up with their foals

8887404
I left it kinda open for just such shenanigans. Who knows what'll happen next!!! :trollestia:

8887410
Sex is what happens next.

Lots of it.

Who's the artist?

8887916
Just look up dimwitdog on derpibooru.

In the first story, Twilight had to use the 'want it, need it' spell to get Shining interested in her cock (which technically makes it rape) while in this fic apparently he's been interested in cocks for a while now. Feels like you're trying to go for two different angles at the same time.

And I concur with 8887404. Turning Shining into Gleaming (perhaps permanently, or leaving it entirely up to the whims of Twilight/Velvet/Cadance) and fucking her that way, is definitly relevant to my interests. My Gleaming Shield comissions can attest to that :p

my stick went so hard when i read this. I could cry.

Was about to read this until it said "futa on male"... Miss me with that gay shit.

Something tells me Cadence will make an appearance next.

Please keep these going as long as possible. Very sexy, and for a part three, might I make a suggestion and a “contribution”?

I always love Futa Princess Twilight Clop, wish the were more of those around. I always love Sub Shining armor stories, with seeing him humiliated and emasculated by his any feminine figures in her life. I wonder if Princess Celestia got her way with shining too? I wonder how Nightlight got hitch with Velvet in the first place, was he a sub to beguine with could be interested or was he bought to heel forcibly by his wife?

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Well the "Want it, need it" kind of broke what resolve he had and after the better part of a weekend he kinda grew fond of it.

So hard not to start clopping when reading something this bucking wonderfully lewd. Have an affectionate sphinx nuzzle from me.

We got Twilight and Twilight having their way with Shining. If we also get Night Light teaching Shining how to best please a dickmare (I understand he has a lot of experience) and Shining and Cadance's relationship being transformed by all these events, we will have a complete set. There is also Flurry Heart, but that's a naughty, naughty thought.

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Oh I know the short description is super low shelf levels of cheese but I just couldn't help myself. Sometimes ya just gotta have fun with this shit ya know! :trollestia:

Also thank you for that Jon reaction, got a good chuckle out of that

Since Velvet and Twilight were conducting a 'test', didn't Twilight basically mess with the results by using the want it, need it spell?

Also, what exactly is Shining's deal?
Gay?
Bi?
Straight but with an intense interest in cocks, while not liking guys they're attached to?

8890466
I bi but with a heavy predilection for anal and thirst for dongus although he's quickly developed a taste for being a bottom.

Needs a sequel where he gets a puss and Twily breeds him while Cadence and Celestia watch. While giving commentary and tips.

Well, that was a fun story. I was hoping Night Light would get to join in too, though. Seeing Twilight railing him while Shining gets it from Velvet would have been amazing.

It continues!

Sir, you may want to investigate a certain set of numbers. A set. perhaps, consisting of 1734570? Just a suggestion.

8902730
this was part 2

Wow, Twilight sure is manipulative.

Fome #25 · Sep 26th, 2018 · · 7 ·

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I kind of hope the story doesn't take that route.

  • When you have a character not only cheat on his marefriend (with nopony, including him, realizing that he was mind-controlled), but specifically scream out how much better the other filly is, you create the expectation that there'll be consequences.
  • It's been implied that sexually exploiting an underage filly, let alone your own sister, is considered just as unforgivable in this setting as in real life.
  • Cadance deserves a real stallion. Maybe Buck Withers is single?
  • So far, these stories have been about degrading and humiliating Shining. Wearing makeup and stockings and flirting with stallions are degrading things for a stallion to do; but they're completely normal for a mare. (Getting gangbanged is slightly less normal; but still more so for a mare than for a stallion.)
  • So far, these stories have been about Shining being led down a path of self-destruction. Reuniting with his marefriend and conceiving a foal would be the opposite (at least barring headless_rainbow-style plans for the latter).
  • Shining does not seem like he'd be a very good mother.

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Did you miss the part where Night Light couldn't stand to see what was happening and left?

If he does show up again, I kind of hope he's found dead by suicide, with the Twilights not caring. Better that than being roped into their degeneracy.

Flurry doesn't seem very likely to appear at this point; unless she's orchestrating the whole thing after having traveled back in time.

9195031

flirting with stallions degrading for a stallion

No, that's called homosexuality

9198399
I could be wrong, but I don't think being gay requires you to wink at and flirt with literally every male you see; let alone everything else Shiny does in this series.

9199494
I don't think it's particularly degrading to be sexually promiscuous. Not in a way that actually matters at least.

9206561
I wish I knew how to bridge this communications gap (if it is a communications gap and not just people being offended by the idea [yet somehow not offended by the story?]). Fortunately, it doesn't matter; the story says what it says (my local copy won't change, even if the online version does) and will go where it goes.

Celestia it was so loose now,

I would like to be in shining armours place 😜

The only thing I don't like is the lack of consequence for Twilight. The previous story clearly showed that she used the Want it, Need It spell to get into Shining's Bussy.

From BBBBF Piggyback Ride

The white stallion’s mind was suddenly filled with an inexorable desire to service Twilight’s cock, his vision locked on every scintillating inch of the fuchsia meat slung between her legs. “I...I want it,” he mumbled.

“You just want it?” Twilight asked, flexing her dong and causing it to slap against her belly, smearing the purple fur with precum in the process.

“I need it,” Shining Armor groaned, his blue eyes filled with longing, practically begging to be used.

“There’s a good boy,” Twilight said, pulling his panties down just a tad, to jam the tip of a bottle of lube into his pucker, squeezing its contents in his backdoor. ‘Want it, need it spell. Gets ‘em every time’ she thought to herself as she looked up at her brother’s imploring ass.

This story acts like Shining simply couldn't control himself naturally. This story also makes it clear that Velvet and Twilight had some sort of bet going on about whether Shining was intrinsically interested in mating with Twilight. Twilight in fact cheated to get the result.

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