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Some Leech


I...I am a monument to all your sins...

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9097992
Actually...

Spitfire and Fleetfoot aren't all that large. They just seem bigger because Shining's is a bit smaller. Also, if you think this is bad, wait until he tangles with some alicorn equipment!!! :trollestia:

Still waiting for this to be featured, It's already been about an hour or two, should be in the box by now

Edit: There we go, up to 15min later ;p

9097992
>now
Oh, just now that happened? I thought that was a rule of herms and dickgirls?

Damn this was a great read, always love Futa on sissy Males stories and you hit it just the notes, you are just so awesome with that. I hope Cadance will turn out to be one along with Chrysalis with impregnation him with her eggs.keep up the good work on that front.

9098122
You gotta wonder where Cadance has been this whole time...

:unsuresweetie:

Also, thanks for the compliment! There'll be more to come in this line so I certainly hope you stick around! :yay:

Good to see this series continue, and it only gets better. I hope to see more of Shining's story, as well as Rumble's. Maybe they could even meet one day!

Mares' Day Out

It's nice to see apostrophes being used properly!

Also, well done for being so consistent with your content. I swear it's been a story a week for the last six months or so. Keep it up!

9098228
Aye, consistent output of nearly every hedonistic flavor. Hope you enjoy it!

I gotta say I loved it just as much as the two before. Can't wait to see just how Cadence will love his disposition, and how she'll invite Chrysalis to help.
I wouldn't recommend making him a full mare though. It would become just another futa on female fic... if (and I do support his through breeding)/when it happens he should become a dickmare. After all, there has to be something to remember himself and every mare that has her way with him of his origins.
That and Twilight should not be denied the chance to give that to him. She's a sweet little thing, horny as hell and with a fifth leg to match, but still a kind foal. Once she's developed enough for taking dick not being harmful, who is she to deny her BBBBF the pleasure of actually screwing his sweet little sister, even if only once? It wouldn't be right!

Bonus points if every mare he has been with manage to knock him up sometime. Extra cookie if Cadence does it at the same time he does with her (because more screwing is always a plus!)

Once again another awesomely written story! One thing that'd interest me is whether the potions just changed his looks, or did they also alter his mind furthermore? And in addition to that, if he lost his muscle to "supple flesh" during the time he was at home for his "special training", did he get weaker both in mind and body or can he still be considered a recruit for the royal guard?

9099858
To address these questions!
The potions only affected his body. His mind, at this point, is pretty well broken, but this is due to his own desire certain activities.
He is slightly weaker due to the loss of muscle mass although he's still considered a guard recruit. Fortunately, Celestia granted him a leave of absence so he's officially covered in that regard.

One has to wonder though, will Shining ever see his fellow recruits again? :trollestia:

Seriously, why is every story you write so bloody hot? This was intense

9100165
You flatter me!
Honestly, my goal is to open a "clop buffet" by having at least one story for every fetish and kink.
Even with working a full time job, I still find to crank out at least one a week, while keeping two finished ones in queue at any given time.
Anyway, enough banter from me. Thank you for the kind words lad/lass, I hope you stick around to enjoy what's to come!

9100201
Always my good Leech, always.

muh dic

9100201
There's a lack of calamari in the buffet. Think you can fix that?

EDIT: Just realized the joke doesn't work very well.

9100786
I'll freely admit, there has been a rather stunning lack of tentacles on Leech's Cloptastic Smut Emporium and All you Can Eat, 24 Hour Car Wash!!!

Never you fear good sir and/or ma'am! There shall be wriggly goodness in the future!!! :yay:

that's some high quality smut right there

9100054
Well, will he ever see them again? :3

Oh, and one more thing that I'd like to know, will his balls and dick shrink so much that they will be his new "sissy equipment"? A tiny coinpurse and a miniscule clitdick? And what would his current size be considered as? I just have to know!

9103400
Will he ever see them again? More than likely, yes. Given how smitten he was with their treatment, and the fact that they're Wonderbolts, it wouldn't be too surprising.

In regards to his equipment, I kept the specifics rather nebulous. Taking a page from H.P. Lovecraft, I left it to the reader's imagination to determine just how small they were. I myself tend to picture everything on the smaller side, but that's just me. :raritywink:

9103592
Fun fact: I actually have the Star of Chaos tattooed on myself!

if you keep this up you might as well take the plunge and total turn shining female and get him pregnant that would be a great way to end this series. good story

9103790
I would rather he kept his dick... But if he gets a pussy to go along with it, fine by me!

9101381
Fabulous darling!:raritystarry:

9104640
>Fabulous Darling

Oh boy, wait until you see the one coming up this week!!!

Remember to smash that like and subscribe button!!!! :trollestia:

9104693
Wrong platform, wrong media, and wrong website.

You take a masculine stallion as captain of the guard, and give females cocks to rut him with? Adding foals and family must just be to make sure you get this as wrong as possible. While I like some of what you write, this gutter trash really doesn't serve anyone well. Hopefully Cady sees this and exacts justice on the filth that's taken place. Poor guy. Shame on you (and others).

9109275
While I appreciate the fact that you took the time to comment, I'm not sure what you were hoping to achieve here. I write all sorts of fetish material and, as such, not everyone will enjoy everything I create. I always try to do a decent job with tagging the kinks in my stuff, as well as writing decent descriptions of the content, so people have some sort of warning regarding what they're getting into.

While you may not enjoy this, or similar works, others certainly do. Feel free to skip over stories which don't cater to your tastes!

Thanks for giving it a go though and I do hope you find some of my other stories more enjoyable! :yay:

Let’s have Celeste to get involved and have her show why she’s the princess of the sun Mybe even have chrysalis show up Have her fall in love with him That’s why she came back to ruin his wedding She just can’t get enough of that ass

9109886
THINKING INTENSIFIES

9110117
Thank you thank you I try to connect your story in the actual story to make them both more interesting

9109724
What I hope to accomplish, is simply to remind you that what you do affects others, and presenting such backwards and atrocious things, even in a fictional setting, to impressionable young people allows a problems in the real world.

You absolutely do tag and describe things very well, but tell me, if I don't see something wrong, is it suddenly not wrong? The "don't like don't read" rhetoric is as ineffective as the day of its inception.

Using the reasoning that others may enjoy it doesn't really justify it either. If I enjoy something wrong, does that make it right? Of course not.

So while I appreciate your cordial and safe reply, I hope you at least understand the potential harm you bring with certain material. And while individual responsibility is very important, things like this (and this isn't even mainly focused on kids, like some of your other works!) don't help anyone in the slightest. To think otherwise is foolish.

9110654
One could easily argue that any explicit material based on this show is, as you put it, "backwards and atrocious". To clarify, by your logic, getting off to cartoon horses is tantamount to bestiality and, as such, those who enjoy it should be judged accordingly.

I have never, nor will ever, claim that my literary works "help" anybody. I simply write for the fun of it and, on occasion, for commissions.

Also, on the last note of the "potential harm" of this and similar works, I'll leave you with this. There are many, many things in the world that could, by your standard, lead to potential harm; among them are such things as: alcohol, violent video games, firearms, knives, cars, violence in movies, offensive content (of any nature), religion, etc etc. Censoring fictional content will solve nothing, in my opinion.

Lastly, I'd like to say that I salute your stance on the matter. While I may not agree with your opinion, you're more than entitled to it and to present it to others. I doubt my work will inspire anyone to commit atrocities, especially given most of my content lies within the realm of fantasy, but I wish you luck with your endeavors good sir or ma'am.

Comment posted by Glacial Spectre deleted Aug 15th, 2018

9110683
Generally speaking, I find most of who I talk to to imagine themselves as a pony, making it same-species and not bestiality. But even if it were, straight sex would certainly be closer, than giving females parts that they, by definition, shouldn't have, and then using them in a place that wasn't designed for such use. This doesn't even take into account family ties, and children.

I should have been clearer, as I meant "help" to be "get off". the rush of dopamine from release creates neural pathways that are near, if not the same as addiction to narcotics. And to support this issue with the content you create, and assist in cementing these ideas, is far deeper than video games, or movies. The levels of dopamine is more level, and lower overall than with porn, where people go for that rush, that "high", just like most drugs. Knives, cars, firearms and things don't convey ideas. Misuse of them is of course, terrible, but they're just tools. Not comparable to the other things imo. Alcohol is of course, it's own problem too. I don't think there's much debate on that.

I appreciate you entertaining this discussion, and being civil about it. While I hope your work doesn't do that either, I feel like if you're not part of the solution, you're part of the problem. While you and others may think it innocent fantasy, there's always that amount that bleeds over into reality, and while that's more up to the individual mind, it's best to not play into those odds. Most people don't start taking tons of drugs. Equally, most people start with vanilla porn. It's things like this that allow for deeper and more depraved things to thrive, on their journey to find their fix, until for some, it's not enough anymore. While censoring content may not do much in your mind, if you don't teach people that wrong is right, then they'll be better able to understand right from wrong. While I enjoy the quality of your writing, it's frustrating to see it so misdirected here.

9111005
Ah, you're speaking from a biological stimulus standpoint. In that case, there are many such activities which could be deemed as being harmful or habit forming; for example, gambling, video games, and sugar. While the former two may cause behavioral issues, the latter of the three can cause significant physiological harm over time.

If you're taking offense regarding the nature of kinks/fetishes, I'll ask you this, where do we draw the line?
BDSM could elicit one to seek psychological or physiologically abusive relationships.
Vore or Guro could, by your logic, push a person to commit heinous crimes.
And, as stated in one of my earlier replies, works of fiction involving fantasy creatures could encourage one to pursue bestiality.

This is all hypothetical, seeing as how someone who's capable of thinking wouldn't stoop to such lows, but it should serve as a warning that censorship is a dangerous game. For example, the Slenderman web series "inspired" two young girls to commit attempted murder on a fellow student of theirs. Should we ban horror movies/writing due to his? No, of course not.

Lastly, while I'm all for a spirited debate, I'd ask that any further discussion be moved to DMs. The comments section of a salacious fan fiction isn't the proper place to hold such talks. So if you wish to continue, please contact me directly.

9111216
I just have to say, I love your user name.
That is all...:yay:

I like how Night Light is completely and forever nope the fuck out of this story.

And then next comes the chastity cage :trollestia:

Good story, keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

9159162
Thanks m8! Working on thr next installment!!!

That was certainly a sequence of events. Looking forward to any continuation.

9098006
As the saying goes, who needs organs?

9098122

I hope Cadance will turn out to be one along with Chrysalis with impregnation him with her eggs.

...Do you want to try that again?

9098194
That'd be tricky when Rumble's story seems to branch off from season 7, with the series' events presumably having happened normally up to that point.

9110271
This seems pretty far diverged from canon already, though.

9130770
It seems like the stories have been inconsistent about Shining's equipment. Sometimes he stays limp even when he's cumming (in which case he wouldn't need a cage); other times he gets normal erections.

Another inconsistency is whether Shining is attracted to cocks in general, or to mares' cocks in particular.

All the feminized unicorn could think about in that moment

A nice addition would be if Shining also had to do some less fun things. Like go train specific muscle groups and go on a specific diet.

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