North of the Crystal Empire, Chrysalis is a queen without subjects. Starved of love and affection, all hope seems lost until she finds shelter in something that can only be described as ‘alien’.
***Updated: 5-29-2019***
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Interesting start. You have earned a tracker and an upvote. :)
Crossover with what?
8966737
Star Wars and Grand Admiral Thrawn. Maybe...
8966761
In that case it should probably have the Star Wars tag.
8966737
Star wars rebels apparently, the blue dude is most likely Thrawn
You've misspelled her name as "Chrystalis" in the story blurb and once in the story itself.
Huh, wasn't expecting Art-Critic-Blue-Admiral-cicle. Interesting start.
Vague
Now I'm curious on what aspect of the force the recovered admiral is from. I'm kinda hoping chrisi goes grey Jedi.
If Chrysalis thinks she can manipulate Thrawn, she’s got another thing coming.
This was sweet, but I recommend not making every sentence a paragraph and structuring your stories a bit better. Apart from that short and sweet!
Interesting start. And poor Chryssie.
Yeah, no need for a new paragraph for each sentence.
'the snow, I sure if what she was looking' - unsure
Hmm, so far so good. Now, it'd be such a pity if the ship 'accidentally' fired its energy cannons at the traitorous hive. :D
No idea who Ezra is.
'senserity' - sincerity
'on my ship our out in the' - ship our out
You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Why isn't there a human tag?
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He's a character from the Star Wars: Rebels TV series. Don't know much else about him, though.
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Because if I remember Star Wars lore correctly, Thrawn isn't human. He's a blue-skinned species. I think they're called the Chiss.
Not sure, though. I'm more of a Trekkie than a Star Wars fan.
They're off to a great start!
'What could I possible do' - possibly
moreeee
I wonder if Chrissy is going to break down into an emotional wreck next chapter.
Good, keep going. Though I wish chapter to be longer.
Chryssie needs a lightsaber.
'spectical' - spectacle
9055864
Not a bad idea. We’ll see what the future for her holds when I return to this story.
You should have other Star Destroyers from the 7th Fleet crash in the same planet too.
I imagine another Star Destroyer, perhaps with Captain Pellaeon, crashing into a desert.
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I think Thrawn’s destroyer was the only one to be taken away into hyperspace, but I could be wrong.
Ugh.
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Most likely not. That one officer said the ships were just gone, as if they disappeared. Not to mention, Dave Filoni and the others were huge fans of the Thrawn Trilogy. Considering Pellaeon is also Timothy Zahn's character, they would never give him one line and then he's gone.
I believe all of those Star Destroyers in orbit were sent into hyperspace too.
Go Chryssie go!
The storm trooper that ran is a Jedi isn't he.
Aw hell. Thrawn better not fucking lose.
And, they don’t know if it’s the Chimaera. It could be another Star Destroyer from the 7th Fleet.
Wow... this is dramatic plottwist, though I hope Canterlot will stand.
Hold up, it isn’t like Thrawn to go in and just bomb Canterlot because of a show of force and one’s account of the ponies’ tendency to rebel.
Thrawn would’ve studied them more, look at their art pieces and to understand their species.
He resorts to violence last when encountering a new species. In Legends, he studies every new species’ arts to understand them, and then make plans in case peaceful negotiations fail.
There are only two instances where his command commited genocide. One was when he couldn’t understand a new species’ art and ordered a Base Delta Zero on their planet.
The other incident was when Admiral Delak Krennel who was under his command, defied Thrawn’s orders and commited a Base Delta Zero on a new planet.
For Thrawn to go and bomb Canterlot without studying their art and negotiating with the ponies peacefully at first is very unThrawn-like.
For your sakes, I hope he was only bluffing to see where Chrysalis’ loyalties lie.
9075698
Agreed.
But, this IS sort of thing he'd bluff.
After all, he doesn't know Chrysalis well enough to determine if her loyalty would last, so he would likely say such things to force her hand.
First thing Thrawn would do would be to contact the rest of the 7th Fleet.
Then he would proceed to study the ponies and every other species on the planet before approaching them peacefully.
Also, he wouldn’t be forcing them to join the Empire. Of course, he would give them the option, but he’s always perfectly fine with making an alliance instead.
So far, the Thrawn in your story isn’t Thrawn and like I said before, I hope what he said about bombing Canterlot was only a bluff.
9097356
We can assume he already contacted the 7th fleet. We haven't seen everything he's done.
It's very obviously a bluff. After all, if it wasn't, Ezra wouldn't have been captured and brought there right as Chrysalis was arrested.
9097525
If Thrawn is going to be portrayed correctly, he would either convince the ponies that Ezra and Chrysalis are the enemies, or offer an alliance with Ezra and Chrysalis to prepare for the enemies threatning the known galaxy.
9097567
He hasn't exactly left the Frozen North yet, so you don't exactly know that he's not going to convince the Ponies Ezra and Chrysalis are some evil alliance or whatever (after studying their art).
9097807
You're right. He'll more than likely study art and then form alliances with the ponies.
Chrissy you missed an epic weeeeeeeeee!
9097883
Yeah, and then from there Ezra and Chrysalis are screwed. Unlike Lothal, the Ponies know nothing of the Imperials and Thrawn can use this to his advantage.
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Or he can just show his side of the Empire or even form the Empire of the Hand with this planet as his HQ.
After all, unlike the rest of the Empire, Thrawn and his Empire of the Hand are normally benevolent, aliens are welcomed.
9098011
That wouldn't make sense. Thrawn serves the Empire and as far as he is concerned it still exists.
9098041
That’s kind of what he did in Legends. The Empire of the Hand wasn’t like the Galactic Empire. Aliens were given rights and served in the military. I can see the inhabitants of this planet doing the same.
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Also as far as he is concerned Palpatine is alive. There is no reason to succeed from the Empire.
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Palpatine was alive as well when Thrawn formed the Empire of the Hand in Legends.
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You're right. But this is not legends-based. Its based on Canon
9098201
Palpatine still acts the same as in Legends. He still trusts Thrawn and the whole purpose of the Empire of the Hand is to serve as a frontline defense against the Yuuzhan Vong in Legends. In Disney Canon, Palpatine would be fine with it too because he could use the Empire of the Hand to hide secret fleets and superweapons.
With no idea where they are, this is the time where Thrawn forms the Empire of the Hand, a collection of alliances with the Galactic Empire and the many species in the Unknown Regions. Since we're going with Disney Canon and since the Emperor isn't around to watch him, Thrawn would warn the ponies of the outside threats.
I can see Thrawn forming the Empire of the Hand with the Chiss Ascendency as his main allies. Remember, he isn't 100% loyal to Palpatine. If given a choice between the Emperor and his men and the Chiss, he would 100% sacrifice Palpatine.
As for the Rebels, it's part of his playbook to recruit even traitors. He's done it before in which 5 Stormtrooper deserters known as the Hand of Judgement were recruited by Thrawn who then formed their own 501st Legion consisting of both Humans and aliens to guard Thrawn's headquarters.
Of course, I'm just wishing at this point. It's not above Thrawn to ally himself with Ezra even after everything he did. Just saying.
9105069
Definitely. The ponies could also help him understand the force better in order to counter users of it.
Good chapter so far, but I hope this is where he warns Ezra of the outside threats his people have feared and tries to form alliances.
Wow, things escalated even more, now mutiny goes into mix of problems for our heroes to solve.
A mutiny? Preposterous.
Side Note: This is surprising to me because those under Thrawn are fiercely loyal to him. Only high ranking officers ever thought of betraying or not listen to Thrawn (Disney Canon: Admiral Konstantine and Commander Skarris Legends: General Larr Haverel and Admiral Delak Krennel). I would expect the crew to mutiny against this Captain Cavi, probably led by someone like Commander Faro. Or maybe we can expect Cavi to call for reinforcements only for the reinforcements to be the 7th Fleet who then engage and kill/capture Cavi. I still firmly believe the rest of the 7th Fleet would've ended up at least in the same sector as the Chimera. Pretty sure even the Death Troopers wouldn't dare mutiny against Thrawn.