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this is... probably the first ever Amy rose cross over ever put on this site... and to be honest that's why I put it up here... so anyway... the story is pretty much about Amy and Pinkie Pie... read more to see what's going on!
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Pretty decent if I do say so myself. The premise is original, the grammar is good, I like teh double spacing for new dialouge, and you got Pinkie and Amy pretty good. I will track this. Good job and keep up the good work! Still only somewhat sorry for ragging on yer MLT fic, but only slightly.
~Zee
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Well thanks... I think.
NOOOO! I DON'T WANT TO BE BAKED INTO A CUPCAKE! RUN!
I like where this is going, if Sonic thought Amy was annoying just wait till he meets Pinkie Pie and the same goes for Rainbow Dash and Twilight.
Also your avatar is so cute, Twilight is best little filly actually wait no that belongs to each of the mane six.
936744 Relax Amy doesn't realize that Pinkie Pie's mane is only straight when she's depressed, we're safe FOR NOW *Evil Laugh*!
And of course jsut wiat till Sonic and his friends meet Pinkie Pie, I gurantee that by the end they'll all be pulling out their hair.
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It gets worse: Someone made a fancomic of that fic.
>Mfw reading the description
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>Mfw finishing the chapters
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There is potential here, DO NOT WASTE IT.
It was a little cheesy, but good nonetheless. I'm expecting great things here. Don't let me down! :P
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I know right!
Hm? Well, this is interesting...
I am guessing right now that Pinkie, in amy's body, is even faster than Sonic cause she is faster than RD, who can make a sonic rainboom, and breaks fourth walls, wait, are there fouth walls in video games? If there are, then Sonic, you better run before Pinkie annoys you!
too late!
Very nice. You have been favored. Keep this up. Or else...
You seem to be doing better then my first ever cross over ( as mine was to with a character that was never done before), and promise to read it later.
It was ok, but a little lacking. It seems to be missing something, and I have no idea what.
936771You do realise that now that Pinkie is in Amy's body, technically "Amy" can now beat Sonic. Usering her physics shattering/4th wall breaking Pinkie powers, she can go faster than Sonic.
Also, to the author, good job so far. Was kinda hoping Pinkie and Amy would meet, like the cover showed, but oh well. Time to read on and see how well they take being in each others' bodies.
I am loving this story. in fact, if I ever finish my current fanfic, mind if I use your idea, just tweak it a bit?
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Tweak it how?
937209Still an unfinished thought process, but from what I can think of, still use the chaos emeralds, but instead of swapping bodies, either bring sonic characters to Equestria or the Mane 6 to Mobius. Basically I wanted to know if I could ue your chaos emerald mishap idea.
yeah go ahead.
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Hey!
YOU STOLE MY COMMENT! I SAID THAT FIRST!
Oh sorry, just wanted to point that out
Currently working on 3rd chapter.
Eh... it's original and it does seem interesting.
I'm willing to read it as a fan of both Sonic the Hedgehog and MLP:FIM.
Pinkie with a Hammer....Pinkie pie with a Hammer and her unique "personality"...Totally worth the reading.
Ha, if Sonic has troubles before with Amy Rose, well wait until she meets the "new" Amy.
I'm half hoping you would go this route with the story...
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Still, this is a nice tale so far and I wish for you to keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.
Well, I'm not quite ready to upvote this yet... but it's certainly looking interesting, I'll admit.
or neigh when I see some more chapters.
I decide
Also, you might want to go back and check your grammar. It helps to read it out loud to yourself or someone else, and revise anything that comes out weird, or sounds really weird to others.
Oh, god, PINKIE'S DROPPING THE HAMMER! RUN, KNUCKLES! RUUUUUUUUUN!
Nice dude! Just make sure she only gives Knuckles a mild concussion. I'd hate for him to have permanent brain damage, unless it actually makes him more sociable.
...okay, I'll upvote this.
It's interesting that Pinkie seems to have both sets of powers.
Now I can't wait for Sonic to meet Pinkie Pie, I gurantee Pinkie Pie will drive him crazy.
942380Oh gods, if Amy bugged Sonic, Pinkie could possibly lead him to suicide. PINKIE! GET AWAY FROM SONIC
942547 I could totally imagine Amy saying something like that.
Bring the Hammer Down Pinkie, Show them who they're messing with.
Ha, this is going to be good. I can't wait to see how Amy encounters the likes of Gummy, Pinkie's Pet and how she reacts to Rainbow Dash.
Plus, Sonic and Tails are going to have a bit of a problem containing Pinkie pie in one place, especially if Dr. Eggman finds out about it.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
wait until she pulls out her party cannon.
Please don't forget to capitalize proper nouns. This is good so far though
So this is the Sonic X version of Sonic the Hedgehog and his friends, right ?
Well if so, then that's fine with me as it can give Rainbow an even chance to matching speeds with Sonic.
Nice update upon such a great storyline like this one. Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline.
Sonic X... GRRRR
I'm okay with the show, but to me, it just killed the characters. Personalities of cereal boxes... All I'm going to say.
955627 Well that depends on whether you saw the 4 Kids dub or the orginial Japanese verision but yeah that show was pretty cheesy even for Sonic.
And why do I feel that Sonic is going to meet Pinkie Pie in the next chapter?
955715Because it's obviously the most chaotic and possibly scar you for life experience that could happen. With Pinkie Pie, it's always gonna be chaotic. And yea, I did watch the 4kids dub, so it was EXTREMELY cheesy. Also, Chris sounds like a little 7 year old bitch.
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Well I'm sorry if i ruined the story for you... I just thought it would be a good referance...
955757You didn't ruin the story. I'm still enticed to hear where this is going, so I will be continuing to read it. Just that I didn't care for Sonic X too much.
I approve.
955722 I don't know if the original Japanese verision is any better but I don't think it was quite as cheesy as the 4kids dub.
And as for Sonic let's hope he stays sane after all he meets Pinkie Pie or else Pinkie Pie will meet the business end of Amy's hammer!
955867um, you don't really know what AMY's version of the business end of her hammer is... do you?
Also, I think you forget that Pinkie now has her hammer.
I'm okay with that particular Sonic X reference, because Cosmo is the only thing I liked about the series. Taismo is my favorite pairing in the Sonic universe.
I have no idea how to feel about this...
Oh, Pinkie, Pinkie, Pinkie...
955895 I know Amy can use that hammer to create small tornadoes and in Sonic X she was more than capable of using her hammer to smash things or whack others. And what I meant by that is that if Amy and Pinkie Pie ever get their bodies back Amy will hunt down Pinkie Pie and then let her hammer do the talking.
Pinkie Pie falling in LOVE with Sonic
, didn't see that one coming. 
Also thumbs up if you're reading this chapter in Sonic's new voice (you know the one from Sonic Colors and Sonic Generation).
958690I know what you meant. It's just when I hear the business end of amy's hammer, I think something totally different, considering the stuff I've seen and read.
958903 Are you implying that some fans thing Amy uses her hammer for far more nastier things cause if so I don't want to know what gives them such ideas.
959015Yea, that's pretty much it.
959034 I would expect that from fans of FiM who make a habbit of making everything seem like a double entrede but not from Sonic fans!