“Sonic! Wait for me!” I yell as I try to keep up with him and the others… I finally stop when I realize that they are too far ahead of me. “Ugh… he always does this!” I yell to myself. “Why couldn’t I be born as fast as Sonic…?”
Hi, my name is Amy Rose… future wife of Sonic the Hedgehog. I am a 12 year old girl and I have known Sonic for pretty much all of my life… I love Sonic… but unfortunately, I don’t think he feels the same way about me… No matter how hard I try to get closer to him in a relationship, he always gets caught up on his adventures. But I will never give up! I will find a way for me and Sonic to be together forever!
“There must be some way that I can keep up with him…” I say to myself.
I then looked over and saw Angel Island… and then it hit me… the Chaos Emeralds! I can use those to help me catch up with Sonic! As I’m running toward Angel Island, I accidentally bump into Cream on the way.
“Oohh…” I say on the ground.
“Oh my gosh Amy, I’m so sorry; I didn’t see you coming!” Cream said apologetically.
“It’s alright Cream, it was sort of my fault too…” I said getting up.
“Why are you in such a rush anyway?” she asked.
“I’m on my way to Angel Island… I’m gonna use the chaos emeralds to help me be faster!” I say to Cream.
“What?? But Amy, you’ve never used the chaos emeralds before… what if something goes wrong?” she says with worry.
“Relax, Cream. I think I can handle it… Besides, what could possibly go wrong?” I ask.
“I don’t know… but just please be careful Amy.” Cream said still worried.
“Don’t worry… I’ll be fine Cream. I’ll see you later!” I yell as I run in the direction of Angel Island again.
It took long enough to get there but I finally made it to the Island… and to no Surprise, I saw Knuckles guarding the master emerald as usual.
“Hey Knuckles.” I say to the red echidna.
“Amy? What the heck are you doing up here?” he asks.
“What? I can’t visit a friend once in a while?” I said.
“Amy…” Knuckles said annoyed.
“Alright, fine. I came here so I could use the emeralds to help me be faster… so if you’ll excuse me…” I say walking toward one of the emeralds.
“Whoa whoa whoa! I don’t think so!” he said stepping in front of me. “The chaos emeralds should only be used in times of need!”
“Well I NEED them to help me be faster so I can keep up with Sonic!” I yell.
“Amy, I can’t let you do that! The emeralds have to stay where they are!” he says.
“Oh yeah…?” I say as I pull out my Piko Piko hammer.
“Woah woah woah! Easy! Easy!” He yells.
“So can I use the Emeralds then…?” I ask about to swing.
“Alright! Alright! You can use them, just put that hammer away!” he says.
“There, now was that so hard?” I say putting away my hammer.
I take the chaos emeralds one by on and bring them off of the island. I then start walking home with the emeralds. But when I get home with the emeralds… I have no idea how to use them…
“Come on, Amy, think!” I say to myself. “How did Sonic activate their power…? Hmm… oh! That’s right!”
I turn to the emeralds and… “CHAOS CONTROL!” I yelled.
At first nothing happened… but then the emeralds started flashing brightly… and then flashed bright enough to a point where I was blinded and couldn’t see a thing!
“What’s going on!?” I yelled.
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“So Twilight, you need my help with what again?” I asked the purple unicorn pony.
“I told you Pinkie… I need your help to test out a spell that I’ve been studying.” Twilight said. “If it works… it should allow another pony to see other worlds, even unknown to us!”
“Is it safe?” I ask.
“Of course it’s safe! I wouldn’t be testing it on you if it wasn’t.” Twilight said.
Hello everypony! My name is Pinkamena Diane Pie, but everypony calls me Pinkie Pie! I have many friends here in Ponyville. I LOVE making new friends… but what I love more than making new friends is throwing a Party for those new friends! Of course I mostly hang out with my best friends; Twilight, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy… and my best friend of all time… Rainbow Dash! They are a group of ponies that I can always count on.
“Are you ready to test it out Pinkie Pie?” Twilight asked.
“Okie Dokie Lokie!” I responded.
“Good… now this may hurt a bit.” She says as her horn glows. Magic aura surrounds my head.
“Oooo….” I said.
“Do you see anything?” Twilight asked.
“Nope. Nothing yet.” I responded. “Oh! Oh! Wait! I do see something!”
“Really? What do you see?” she asks.
“I see a blue spikey thing running really fast… I see a fox with 2 tails… A bunny… and a big flash of ligh- AAHH!!” I screamed.
“Pinkie Pie!?” Twilight yelled.
Suddenly everything went white! I can’t see anything! I couldn’t even hear Twilight’s voice anymore! Twilight! Where are you…!?... eventually I could start to see again… but… where was I…? This doesn’t look like Twilights house at all! The room was smaller… wait… why do my hooves feel funny…? I looked at my hooves… but I saw no hooves!
“AAAHHH!” I yell. “What are these!?”
I feel my head “and what happened to my mane…? And my tail!?” I yelled still in confusion. “SOMEPONY PLEASE TELL ME WHAT’S GOING ON!”
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Ugh… finally… the emeralds are stopping… wait… where are the emeralds…? And… where am I!? This isn’t my house! I tried standing upright, but I fell forward.
“Huh…? I can’t get up? That’s weird… hey how come I can’t feel my-“ I stop as I look at my hands… they were hooves! Wh-What’s going on!? I run around on all fours and I finally find a mirr-
“AAHHH!!!!!!” I scream as I look at myself in the mirror. “W-What happened to me…!? I’m a pony!?” then it hit me… “Oh no… what if the chaos emeralds did this!?... if that’s true… then that means… I’m stuck here!!”
A/N
Hello everypony,
I really hope you like this new story. And don’t worry; just because I’m working on this story, it doesn’t mean I’m going to stop working on the MLT sequel.
Pretty decent if I do say so myself. The premise is original, the grammar is good, I like teh double spacing for new dialouge, and you got Pinkie and Amy pretty good. I will track this. Good job and keep up the good work! Still only somewhat sorry for ragging on yer MLT fic, but only slightly.
~Zee
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Well thanks... I think.
I like where this is going, if Sonic thought Amy was annoying just wait till he meets Pinkie Pie and the same goes for Rainbow Dash and Twilight.
Also your avatar is so cute, Twilight is best little filly actually wait no that belongs to each of the mane six.
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I know right!
Hm? Well, this is interesting...
936771You do realise that now that Pinkie is in Amy's body, technically "Amy" can now beat Sonic. Usering her physics shattering/4th wall breaking Pinkie powers, she can go faster than Sonic.
Also, to the author, good job so far. Was kinda hoping Pinkie and Amy would meet, like the cover showed, but oh well. Time to read on and see how well they take being in each others' bodies.
Eh... it's original and it does seem interesting.
I'm willing to read it as a fan of both Sonic the Hedgehog and MLP:FIM.