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Hello, my name is XFangHeartX. I love MLP, Inuyasha, and One Piece. I hope we can be good friends here. ^^


When a lost unicorn filly named Moonlight Essence appears at Twilight's castle, it doesn't seem to make any sense at first...until news of wolf attacks throughout Equestria reach Ponyville. Why would a pack of wolves go through all this, just to chase one little unicorn? Her prized necklace may hold the answer.

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Awesome start

Nice start! :pinkiehappy:
Though, I felt the sleeping together thing for protection and comfort felt a little sudden. I can understand why it makes sense but still felt a little sudden.
Loving the complicated relationship of the head wolves. Can’t wait to see more of those two brothers

Yeah, I figured maybe the sleeping for comfort thing might have been a bit sudden, too, but I went with it, anyway.

Thanks, though! You're gonna be seeing more of them later on!

Depends on age of kid, from cert.ain age their behavior pattern changes and it may not work anymore. But that human point of view , equines are more group-like? But it would be/feel more natural if a grown up offered protection

Oh this is VERY good! I can't wait to see more. btw heres a story you might like.


What I was talking about wasn’t about the age of the filly and how she should behave, it just felt a little fast to suddenly trust a stranger like that to me.

But, as I stated, I can understand the why. Plus, even though they are animals, they do not behave as such.

I thought of it terms of evolutional behavior, no way i would call a sentient "animal"

Alot of behaviour patterns of humans are defined by our biology. whole imprinting/negative imprinting thing. Juniour would trust a stranger more, teen would trust a relative less in human case. In equnies competetive behaviour appears only after maturity.

Pony mode of operation: Do you eat ponies? - No - Let us be friends!

I'm only half serious and I'm quite ok with current state of affairs

and now the threat has been revealed~

How will our heroes fare against this one?

Awesome chapter and I feel sorry for moonlight

It's awesome and can't wait what in shore for twilight and moonlight

Looks like it's another foe the princesses failed to slay. Again.

Thanks! What'd you think of Celestia's reaction?

Pretty interesting
I can't wait to see what comes up for it

I know, right?! MLP definitely need some wolf characters, not just timber wolves (sorry, but they don't really count to me).

Other than that, what do you think of the story, so far?

Never a town guard when you need one.

I think you're forgetting that Shining Armor and some guards are patrolling the borders of Ponyville.

The borders but not the town itself. Bad guys always find a way to sneak past patrols.

That is true.

Other than that, though, I hope you're enjoying the story!

I am! If you want, check out my For Honor fic.

Cool chapter
Hopefully, we'll get to see Moonlight hanging with the rest of Mane Six

Not just them, but the CMC, too!

It's nice to see Moonlight making such progresses, I hope that she'll enjoy the cupcakes :twilightsmile:

Using the castle of the two sisters as a base...a possibly good idea, since nobody visits it usually.


Oh, she will.

And it's right in the Everfree Forest.

Indeed, which makes a territorial advantage for them.

Those wolves should laugh while they can.

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