Sunset tells the truth that her father is Sunburst and everyone is shocked except Twilight who knew since the beginning. To her, it was super obvious.
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Epileptic-autistic eldest of four, artist, creative, and horse crazy girl who is obsessed with entertainment media and history among other things.
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i wanna like this story i really do but its just to fast paste for my taste but it is still good just not my cup of tea
I'm surprised that in this fanfic, Starlight Glimmer is Sunset's stepmother. I've seen a lot of fanfics where Sunset and Sunburst are siblings or classmates, but I like this idea. My only gripe with the fic is that Sunburst doesn't look any older than Sunset.
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Just chalk it up to mirror magic and leave it at that. Also, Twilight is the same height as her mother and father, so yeah. It's not that unreasonable to assume Sunburst is her father.
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Sorry you don't like it, that's too bad.
It's pretty good, I only have one issue with it. the "So beautiful day," says Rainbow Dash needs to be fixed, I suggest either "It's such a beautiful day," or "So beautiful today,". And maybe Fluttershy or Rarity saying the line instead, since that makes a little more sense then Rainbow saying it. Keep writing and have fun! :)
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I went back and fixed that. You did have a very valid point. It makes a lot more sense now that Rarity says the line.
I gotta ask why is each chapter a paragraph? As to the story itself, it feels very rushed and a like a lot was left out. I'm sorry but it just seems incomplete, or like a first draft.
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I'm sorry you don't like the story. I really and truly am.
In CreativeVerse, which is my next gen I have in the works, Sunset and Sunburst are brother and sister and a lot of fun aunt dynamics and cousin dynamics are planed for all children created for these characters.
I wondering, who's Sunset mother if Sunburst was her father? And could be Starlight is Sunset step mother now who was know she was her friends.
I would say "My friends is my step mother"
I've been thinking, did Starlight more older than Sunset?