If there's one thing bronies hate more than anything it's nobles, and Celestia has finally had enough of them too. She has a plan for some payback and she intends to enjoy herself, and her sister and Twilight are along for the ride.
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This is pretty good and funny. Some typos here and there, though, could distract from the story itself.
I fell over and my side burst. Thanks to you my doctor has put me on a no laughing prescription for a week.
Best Discord story ever.
That was cute and funny and hilarious XD
This was extremely cathartic to read. I'd love another.
Meh. Just seemed to go on and on and wasn't.. honestly that entertaining.
Hehehe, that was extraordinarily entertaining. Have a mustache
I second the motion
What happened to the pony who was shoved in the bag, and what did she do to deserve it.
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Yeah. I mean, Luna says Celestia doesn't hate the nobles, but everything in this story suggests she does and actually wishes them harm. At the end, I didn't see the humour, only jerks lording their power over those weaker than them.
It's not funny, it's depressing.
Good story, but a lot of the characters seem out of character, the only ponies that seemed like themselves were Twiight and Fancy Pants, and even Twilight was acting a bit off for some of this.
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... Between the typos, and lack of structure / fluidity. It just seemed to drag on and on. It was one of those fics that if it was touched up, and work to make it better could be a good fic. I can see the potential in it. But the fic itself just wasn't as good as it could've been. Could definitely use an editor to polish it up a bit.
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Yeah, I lost interest and stopped reading about...maybe 2/3 of the way through.
The only point of interest was my wondering why Twilight went ahead and drank that gamer fuel even after being warned. She's usually not that stupid.
I think the story can be improved by removing some of the nobles or working out there cases and punicemends more.
Its TIREK.
I've never liked disy so much
That was brilliant
Very popular.