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Mochas Dungeon
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Mochas Dungeon
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Ummmm.....
Knowing you, I'm debating if I should read this or not.
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It's actually based irl, is not so bad, the sequels though...
Funny, I saw this when I was scrolling the front page, and not my Feed. I didn't even see the name 'Mocha', I just saw the title and description and knew what story it was, lol.
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:)
Hope you enjoyed it
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8030002 Well, seeing as that I totally, %100 stray away from human stories yet read this and loved it... yeah, I'd say I enjoyed it.
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99.9% now
Wow.... Thqt was actuactually quite romantic.
I'm a bit surprised this is as short as it is. With the subject matter, usually it goes pretty long. Yet it doesn't feel like anything is really missing too much because of it either. You told what the story needed, and that made it feel satisfying to read for what it was. Over all, very sweet and warm love story.
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Thanks! :)
I'm going to be blunt here, the sex change happens way too quickly and without explanation or logic. Twilight just decide to turn the character into a mare like that?! Why would turning a possible cheating guy into a mare be her or anyone reflex?! Also, why does turning Sil into a stallion makes it fair? Why would Sil even want this? Hasn't she just seen her boyfriend cheat on her? Your characters don't act in a natural way or you don't give the readers enough information to make it seem natural.
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Other than the change, was it okay after that?
I said I would start tonight. I am loving it so far.
Great read, and fuck Twilight.
8063376 so, literally, or rhetorically?
I don't feel Twilight has a real roll in this tale.
I have done a review of this story for the Reviewer's Cafe
Here is the review.
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You make great points and I'll write a story akin to this, with more tale and more justified... Tail.
;)
Thanks!
P.s.
I seem to be master of the 6/10 review score for every story I've ever had reviewed.
Wth
What a cheating ass hole
I am a man. I am a coward. Twilight said s/he was pregnant and once my mind went through that process of predicting possible futures I just couldn't continue. good story though
I love amber, why she wasn't returning in any chapters?
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That's a good idea! Future story idea!!
Decís que sos un asesino de ponys y luego te doblegas ante Amber. Marica.
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That's love. 😆
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No. El amor también es fidelidad y eso no hubo cuando se fue a "desahogarse" con la otra pony ¿Dónde quedó la ferocidad a la hora de defenderse, de llamar la atención de Twilight o de no ser un "cornudo" frente a Spike?