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Mochas Dungeon


My darker (fun) side resides here.

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JackRipper
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Me and my daughter are very close, especially alone at night.

* My daughter and I

JackRipper
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8054529
No problem.

JackRipper
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Also, if I may add, the whole encounter felt incredibly rushed for something that usually takes a lot of build up.

If it is porn for the sake of porn, then I can forgive it if it is lacking a concrete story, but it still lacks the substance that I think could be there with a couple thousand more words.

8054540
It's more of a sequel to a more established story.

The sequel will be like this, essentially porn for the sake of itself.

JackRipper
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8054542
I'm just saying that I think it could be much better if it was longer and more context is provided, that's all. :twilightsmile:

8054547 I totally understand.

I'm coming of a two month writers block, so my stories are a bit sloppy, compared to what I normally write. The next one I'll put more effort into.

It's gonna be from her perspective.

Sk1Tz #8 · Mar 27th, 2017 · · 5 ·

Wow. Cancer for my eyes. Jking.

Not jking. This was pretty terrible. It was rushed all the way through, and felt very odd, like putting a puzzle piece into the wrong place, forcing it in.

Also, foalcon. Foalcon sucks. But that's just a personal pet peeve.

8054788
Agree!
But it's smut, and that gets the popular votes and followers, and if that's what I have to do, then I'll do it, to get more attention.:twilightblush:

8054788 and if you've ever had a quickie, irl, you know it's not long winded and sexual.
It's wham, bam, thank you, ma'am.
:rainbowlaugh:

Camera probably wasn't a camera. The question is, was it her cutie mark... or his.

8054795 lmao. That is so true.

When you sent this over Discord I didn't know it was this kind of story. Sorry, but I'm stepping out on this one. Ain't my cup of tea if you catch my drift.

8054980 Thanks?
You could have just said that over discord, instead of publicly.

this was nice, maybe a bit short, but the idea was good ^^

8054795 You don't have to write stuff like this for attention. I'm sorry I'm not reading this, because foalcon.

daddy and daughter will play

and I'm assuming it's not violent murder like Sweet Apple Massacre. Just be yourself. Write about you and your wife. Write about Rainbow Dash being in a harem with Celestia and Luna, or Starlight's mind control spell goes wrong and the mane 6 end up raping each other. Explore some strange fetish if need be. However, write it because you want to. Not just because clop gets you attention.

Ignore all these people. It was a pretty well written short clopfic. And this sight needs more foalcon. Just because they don't like it doesn't mean others won't. I'd like to see more on this personally, i think this could be a nice spin off to your main story with a good amount of work. Anyway, my main point is, just because all these random bags of dicks don't like foalcon doesn't make the story bad, they need to get a life and stop trying to direct what the writer wants to write. Keep it up! I hope to see more from you as time goes on.

8057919
The next installment will titilate you.

*<>* this has been one of the best pieces of foalcon we've passed by ... 10/10 great job

Do you have a next part ?



There's:
Love Me
Still Love Me?
Good Night, Light

Camping
Camping - Tingles Before Bed

Did I forget something ?

8573643
Still working on them. I've got sidetracked with writers sluggishness and lack of ideas until this very week.

If you said that you’re married and wrote a fic for your wife, then I really hope that this isn’t something you do with your daughter.

9009927
Thank god! I thought I’d have to call Chris Hansen.

9014919
9014919
1) Foalcon
2) Imaginary characters
3) You read it, so you're an accessory!
4) I've written more, too.
5) I have more to write!

9015298
First off, foals are the children of horses. Thus, child pornography.
Second off, the fact that the characters are imaginary doesn’t make it not child porn.
Third off, I didn’t actually read it. You said so in the description.
Forth off,

And fifth off,

9015587
You all your rebuttals, I offer the following.

And simply nod, approvingly, to your opinion.

9016169
Tell me, what is so ignorant about being against a real world crime? Pedophilia is a mental sickness, and people like you are only making these people think of it as okay. Why ask you this, how long until it goes from being accepted in fiction to being accepted in real life? Why egg on the issues of those who either need help or deserve to rot? Sometimes, it doesn’t matter if the subject is fictional. It’s not like you’re writing about someone doing drugs, you are writing something about doing something that even real crackheads high off their asses wouldn’t do. And even then, drugs or substances that are ingested. Foalcon (aka child porn about ponies) is wrong no matter how you slice it. It’s an inhuman thing to think about, yet you call me ignorant? Someone needs to look in the mirror.

Yeah, you’re not going to read that. Because you’re too ignorant to admit that you’re in need of help if you actually get off to this.

9016241
9016241
Please don't assume what I will and won't do.

Actually, I meant to timestamp it to when homer and didn't intent to call or imply you are ignorant, so I apologize for my error. Also, here is my rebuttal.

I do understand the issues at large, but the issue that's equally problematic is that there's no help for people that get off to this in real life.
There aren't support groups like for drugs or alcohol. There aren't specialized therapists or psychologists offering help.

There's only 'you're evil and deserve to go to hell' as an answer. As though fear is going to fix a problem.

You're gonna stop reading and lash out now.

There are many people that find sex with children abhorrent but fantasize about it. To most people that doesn't make sense. "Why or how can someone do that?!"

It's called morality. They know it's wrong, but don't know how to stop themselves. They also know that doing that to a real person, a real child that doesn't know right and wrong in that aspect, would ruin or damage not only the child's life; if not immediately then years down the road, but also their own.

The moral ones know and understand escalation. Start with a touch, end with five objects and looking to the next. The risk and damage to their desire far exceeds the reward.

But fantasizing is a person's safe place, where anyone can do anything. From fighting Dragon Ball style, hurting someone, sex, adventure... A person can't be hurt if it happens in their head. In fact is healthy to fantasize as it recognises and helps resolve tension and personal issues that can't be handled professionally or societal.

Then there are the ones that have reached that point, never had the chance to learn morality or limits and act on impulse. Those are the ones that are akin to serial rapists or murders. They do because they can, it becomes a thrill and moves then to the next because adrenalin fuels their sexual desire.

They only care about self pleasure while blaming others, especially the victim, in classic rape scenarios. These types are the ones that everyone focuses on and attribute to many other types of sexuality including homosexuality, bestiality, and transvestites.

I happen to write this because it is fun to write. I don't find children sexy or attractive any more than I would a real horse, and I certainly know that I'd hate to have a girl as a sexual object because of the risks to her life, long term, and mine as well.

Friends, family, work, freedom. I'd lose everything for 10 seconds of good feelings. Not to mention having to teach the object of my desires how to have sex… all kinds of wrong.

But writing about it falls onto the reader to both choose to read it and what to feel from it.

Just as you chose not to read it, others have. Choices are all that matter in the end.

But that's my take on the matter.

If you'd like more information I can cite more sources that state the facts about sexual mental health.


Citations

https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ1141582.pdf&ved=2ahUKEwjUmsDi3vvbAhUFWa0KHblcDAAQFjAHegQIBxAB&usg=AOvVaw2cCLz2ZS4nUM3ri1kgIhfJ

https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/sex-dawn/201309/can-pedophilia-ever-be-mild

https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/fulfillment-any-age/201301/inside-look-sexual-fantasies%3Famp&ved=2ahUKEwi8toCP8PvbAhUKQ60KHYgJClcQFjAAegQIARAB&usg=AOvVaw0fXuZJqkSU-p-no2potHvZ&ampcf=1

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