Crossovers... we all have seen them... But you know? The crossing over of different Universes is rarely a simple, clean affair...
That is one of the reasons of my existence, My Name is Alfonso Rodriguez, and I am the Zen No Ban'nin, The Guardian of Everything... and I'll be damned to let something as minor as been kicked into the MLP: FiM universe stop me from performing my duties...
As such, while I am restrained to the multitude of Ponyverses in the FiM multiverse I will fulfill my Directives: Keep the Power balance slightly towards "Good" and, For Universes not having any way to deal with the natural Crossovers that happen due to the dance called Universal Momentum act as the cleanup crew once the universes separate...
Unfortunately for me, Pony is extremely popular, so the work seems endless... So join me, and in the future the Mane 6 I befriended in the job of Cleaning Pony!
(And by Cleaning I mean the kind of Stories in this one will be either images from "Behind the scenes" on various Crossovers I happen to like and Insertions authorized in Stories of other Authors... all while having the over arching arc of the training of several ponies to visit other equewstrias besides their own...)
(Yes I know the New cover art can be a bit misleading... but It's a sorta clever memetic style one...)
8051641 ok... Honestly I did it out of respect for your work, I will of course add the disclaimer... Or maybe I will be deleting it... Sorry....
Well this is going to end well I bet. One does not just tromp through dimensions as if it where the local city park. I wonder what will get unleashed?
Door? Perhaps a hint to what they are talking about? Or maybe something that will be explained another day?
Ye God the butchering...
I tried to hold it in... I failed.
*Takes a slow, deep breath, and then lets it out slowly.*
Just... no. I'm not even going there.
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This needs work... a lot of work. Luna's lines are so butchered and indecipherable that I have to make guesses as to what she's saying, grammar is in need of some TLC, and even the punctuation is bad. You also described Luna as ebony, which is incorrect. Luna is a Midnight or Royal Blue. Ebony means black.
The idea, however, seems solid. If you spend some time polishing this up, I would certainly love to read it.
8083513 That is the Original Project... Teleporting Doors, designed to replace trains, converting pony matter into energy, having that energy travel outside the universe, and re assembling it in the target door... instantly... the final use of the doors will be revealed in an Annex...
Passed her dialog through a shaeksperean translator... as this Luna is almost raw from her return, it's annoying at best...
I do love cutie mark / 'ship jokes....
oh I will, but seems impossible to find proofreaders / edithors here...
Wow this story was not listed as having a new chapter. Still I wonder how they will react when they see how many Hero Souls are heading to this particular Equestria?
8163747 will be a Nightmare... at this point in the story I'm dividing my attention between P.E.G.A.S.O. (Anything out of my Ponyverse related), nipping potential threats to the world... (Finding Starlight Glimmer is being quite an issue... and since no non Changeling Magic is allowed in Chrissy's keep...) also avoiding all talk of Royalty the Royals keep throwing at me (Including so called "Nobles" seeking me to lead a coup...) oh, and trying to reduce the sap related incidents around Ponyville... Tree sap is always a problem...
So I might have to subcontract in my Ponyverse if Sven keeps throwing unfit souls there... Do you know of Any unicorns good at magic besides Twilight Sparkle in the days of S. 1 - 2...?
Hey there. You asked for a review from the Café, and I delivered. Btw, I did not like any bit of this story. If you want to see the rant... here ya go
8168543 yay! thanks for the review... it's ok you didn't like it, I'm aware I am not here to please everyone, maybe someone will like it...
as for thy Luna Shakesperian bouts... they might go away.... with time...
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Thank you. I didn't want to be too harsh. I know how it can dash one's confidence. Just keep on keeping on m8
8168686 yeah, don't worry...
oh I almost forgot...
this story is kinda sorta a diary, and as such, there are times the things will get bigger than 1 medium size chapter, so I break the chapter / event in several parts, other times other factors influence the chapter division...
For example, in the case of the "A Glowing Mirror" is / will be a one shot like episode that will link to "The Story of Twilight Glow"
, which was "greenlit" by the author of that story, and the first thing I saw of that universe was my OC interacting with That universe's version of Twilight Sparkle, but for the end result I saw having Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor do it, a simple bureaucratic mission... that will be a two parter... meanwhile "The Awakening of the Soul" was born out of chat with the author of "Hero Souls: Awakening"once I realized several flaws on his process, I notice things, then the me trapped in the Pony Universe acts upon them and I see it, then write it -"I daydream a lot"-
Hopefully there will be plans to continue his works. I have heard that there where verbal plans on who would continue his work. Hopefully they will continue on and in the direction he would have wanted.
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yes, but in the end, It will be not what he had envisioned, similar of how MLP shifted once the Fausticorn left
May he rest in peace.
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As that me said, eternal bliss awaits, he has earned it
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That he has.