Ever since Chrysalis swore vengeance on Starlight, the mare has been making preparations for the day she'd strike.
Twilight is just as concerned, but more for Starlight than an attack from Chrysalis.
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Dr Atlas
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That was mediocre speed of writting fic for picture
Twilight managed to shove a hoof in her mouth before she could continue. “Okay, first of all, eww. Second of all, that’s not for kids, and third of all…”
Did Twilight just break the 4th wall?
Because that would go just oh so well, Evil Black creature becomes a purified White creature
I found this to be pretty funny. Could have gone over it a time or two more for some grammar errors though. good job.
-BFBL
Wow I see people can't take joke :D
Anyway great stuff,and those references
The end alone was golden but everything before was just enjoyable to read as well. Well done, author!
That was great. Good setup for the pun.
Keep going! ;)
7965426 WHAT PUN
I LOVE PUNS WHAT AM I MISSING OUT ON
7967355 read to the end.
7967713 It literally took me reading it like twelve times.
Well played, author. And good on you, Mr Tsauk, for spotting that!
I love the story, and the fact that
QueenChrysalis is good in a way now! Good job!Nice story!
I enjoyed reading it.
I just wonder what will happen next. It says "complete", but kind of sound like an cliffhanger.
Seriously, Starlight, that's pretty racist.
very nice
i'm guessing having chrysalis work at Quills and Sofas felt cliche?
If the commercials taught me anything, it's that bugs spontaneously combust when exposed to Raid.
7948283 Yes, yes she did.
Pinkie, Twilight is braking the forth wall without your permission.
huh? the only thing that comes to mind is a silly short story where Rarity hit a changeling with a flyswatter, and he got insulted and yelled, "i am not a fly!" Rarity actually felt she needed to apologize...
reminds me of an old book called "firebrand": someone asked the reason for a tradition and was told, "traditions don't HAVE reasons, they just ARE!"
Is there going to be a sequel.
I think its 'she want's my head on a Spike.'
Hahah, that was great! And Starlight is clearly racist.
8081377 Unless you were going for a pun, spit is correct, as in spit roasting.
Imagine Chrysalis' reaction if she found a roach motel in Starlight's room
Ha!
This ending makes me want to rap...
Oh..., Chrissy best brace your lungs and bugflanks... Revenge is best paid with Raid, so when you take that spray is when you start to pay. But bug bae, you'd don't know the feel of the thril when your chest feels the chill. Will it kill? Who knows? But I know that this fic didn't blow. What a flow... immma head out right now...
Sorry but I had to...
Or maybe a bell.
