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Oldtakufanboy
Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG
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No sequel
Night Light, you stupid idiot! Why the hell are you cheating on Velvet?! Am I the only that want to punch him in the face because of it? You can't treat women... sorry mares like this!!
Otherwise great story. I really enjoyed reading it. Have a like. :)
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Thanks for the thumbs up and glad you enjoyed
It was a truly great story! Oh sexy Velvet is great.
Love it.
only once question, should he even know what happened or that it was sex when he doesn’t knows anything about it?
a mistake as my cousin proofed.
I actually kind of wish for a sequel, maybe a longer one with him being Twilights new father and all of them reacting to the others mistakes. Maybe Twilight would believe her mother more and Shining would be the one who starts to hate the mother at first.
Out of all the Human/pony romances I've read, this is by far one of the best ones. The story is good, the situation is believable, and the selection of pony is noice. In addition, the action is really good and the fact that the two could possibly have a child is awesome! I know that there won't be a sequel, but a sequel would make this fic even better!
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Thank you for the comment. Yeah, I personally find this one of my favorite works
This is a very good one-shot.
8281503
Thank you
Velvet is possibly the best pone ever, although Lyra is up there too.
Ok, its official, this is the most fucked up thing Ive ever read on this website. I know we are a bunch of anti social shut ins , but this is rerdiculous. He doesn't know what semen is, but he is over 28 years old. he has zero understanding of sex but he wants to be a father? Seriously? WTF?! Are we as a group this sexually fucked up that we write main characters like this?
The Monk
The first half of the story was very well written and I really enjoyed it, but the fic fell apart when it hit the sex scene. I know this particular paragraph has been quoted already, but this is when the immersion was broken for me:
The character is incredibly self-aware to just guess that this is sex if he was never taught what it was in the first place. This basically rushed all the character development into one paragraph rather than making the fic another 500-1000 words including a well-written backstory. After this paragraph happened the pacing of the fic drastically changed and everything fell apart.
Dontcha hate it when that happens
8870584
I laughed reading your post.
That was a wonderful fanfic and I'm glad that I came across this one don't see many good velvet fanfics and I also thought when I read this one damn that nightlight what a dick