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Sean Shamrock
Who gives a shot anymore my stories suck and none of them are good, not to mention I have no reason to call myself an author or writer
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have't read the hole thing yet but ware is this guy supposed to be at?
cuz it said he's walking distance from a lake plus he near new york plus hes near a Forest as well?
i lived in new york for some time now cant really think of a place like that
7270407 see i went to new york (Long Island) to visit family when i was a little and i remembered a park by the forest with a small lake...granted i was like 5 so I can't guarantee 100% accuracy lol
7270501 ahh ok that makes much more sense when it said new york i was thinking the heart of new york the closest thing to a forest would be vines growing on fences but never been to long island myself so you can see my mistake on that
7271234 hey man its' cool. Hope you enjoy the story
well the two biggest criticism i can give is that at the start when the guy met fluttershy there wasnt even a side comment about but its a story going for the clop so i think something like that can be overlooked.
nad for the 2nd it almost felt like fluttershy had more screen time with the guy then rarity. felt like he meats her then works for her then they'er bumping uglys. so it just felt a little fast past.
but all in all i think it was fine
7274358 Thank you for the criticism my friend I'll be sure to work on my pacing in the future. All in all I'm glad you enjoyed it
There is just this one thing. Rarity is not supposed to be carrying that bottle of wine when she gets back should she? Might be an error but all in all, this story is Kool
7296894 Haha ya it was an unfortunate error during production lol
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7394400 Thank you for the thumbs up doom guy
Really great story! Also, the description of the outfit he made for himself "Black suit vest, white button-up shirt, red tie, black slacks and Black Leather Boots" Make me think of the stereotypical Nazi uniform for some reason, especially the leather boots. When's the next "Romantic Equestria" coming out? Not trying to rush you, just curious.
What most of you consider a fedora isn't. Its actually a hat called a trilby. Indiana Jones wore a Fedora. A fedora is a wide brimmed hat. Trilbys on the other hand can have very tiny brims, up to the typical 1950's style (medium) brims that most of you visualize when you think of a Fedora. Its really a trilby.
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The Monk
8108750 Seems unrelated to the story but non the less fascinating. Thank you.
Another neck beards fantasy lmao!