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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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I'm getting a monster musume vibe from this

7733853 Will absolutely admit that this is inspired by it, and other similar concepts.

Well, this story certainly has caught my attention.

I'm not apologizing.

Ah, if only people were complaining. And like the other guy said, this is good. What will be next?

Im confused, the tag says anthro but Flutters fur is brown, wouldnt she have her normal yellow colored fur?
Also, really nice story, a bit short but really good.

7733935 When you said this was inspired by "Monster Musume" i thought Rarity is gonna be the spider lady, but Vampire fits too.
Cant wait to see what the other girls are gonna be like.

That present tense trigger warning though.

Someone's on a downvote spree...

Also noticed some slip-ups, mind if I point them out?

7734580 Looks like he has to pay Dhampir Child Support! Who knows how many Vampire Whores he Seeded and Impregnated!

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As explained in the chapter, this Fluttershy is wolfenkin. In other words, an eqwolf. That's why brown fur.

7736416 It makes sense now that you explained it, however i feel like she could be a wolfkin and still have yellow fur.
But i understand what direction the author went and its fine, im cool with it.

Very nice. Can't wait to see where else this goes.

7734580 Alrighty then.

you saw now sort of toy or anything

I guess the 'now' should be 'no', altough I don't get the point of the sentence.

and make the

Tenses... is what I would say, though I can't say exactly why. Just sounds wrong to me.

It as obvious

'was', forgot a letter there.

and it seems that her current attempt isn’t working

Eh... what exactly isn't working? I mean, if it wasn't her purpose to get him hard, then what?

Fluttershy’s throat as it closes around her.

Wait, what closes around her? I get that his dick gets enclosed by her mouth, but you said 'she', so I don't know where you were going with this?

her.body.

:derpytongue2:

you’re awake probably

I argue that the more common order here is "you're probably awake (now)".

When is the next chapter going to be released?

8061771 No idea! In all honesty, if I pursue this idea further, I may go with my original plan and make it just a collection of smutty OF oneshots. Otherwise, *shrug* I have a lot on my plate and need to remember that I have an excuse to write sexy monster girls.

8061780 Cool. Yes....sexy monsters. I think that all nerds have that sexy monster fantasy at some point, at least once.

8061879 I would probably call someone a liar if they said otherwise.

8061905 I know. They would probably also be lying if they said that they never fantasized about an elf. Maybe.

That was adorably sweet...
But I'm confused about the bit regarding the silver lining at the end. What did he do that he didn't want Rainbow to know about?

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Ah. Yeah, I can see why that would upset Dash when he refused to fuck her. But how did she find out?

8138854 Chit chat and creative liberty for a final joke. :rainbowwild:

Who's Silver Lining and what were they talking about?

8139036 It's an expression, though yes, I capitalized both parts the first time. As for what they were talking about; end joke about Dash finding out that you've slept with at least one of them.

8139044 And that's bad because...? It just shows that you don't see her as a slut. Pinkie and Rarity, are sluts.

8139076 It's not. It's just a joke about her thinking he was too innocent to fuck them.

You step closer, the crease in your brow growing with each step. He’d walked in on her sleeping many times before,

Unless this is a one time pov-confusion, I'm curious who the 'he' here is.

Also, honestly suprised that she can't fly or the like, like a harpy.

8139438 I decided that I wanted to do something more unique.

So is the story Dead ?

Did you name this after that fucking Disney Channel song?

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You named a porno after a Disney Channel song.

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Fuck it, we're friends now.

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