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Lunasservant1985


i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

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Dude, there was no sex in this story whatsoever. There wasn't even any mention of sex in it

Is it just me or is it incomplete? I'm not mad, I'm just a bit confused when it was marked as "Complete" when the main part is not published yet.

I like the story, but where's the sex? :rainbowhuh: there's nothing sexual at all in the story.

I don't mean to sound like a jerk, but it seems like this story is undone. I apologize if I sound like a jerk. :fluttershysad:

PS: I love how you referenced some Stephen King stuff. IT is like my favorite movie based off the book. I always tease my mother because she hates clowns sooooo much. :rainbowlaugh:

Is this really complete? Cause I'm not seeing it

Did you hite complete by mistake ?

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Sorry Sorry Sorry, i had to submit it with just the first part to get tbe story past the mods :facehoof: it IS complete now i swear :twilightblush:

hey lay off guys he's rushing so be fucking patient he probably didn't post this on the this website

6779532 hey don't apologies well you were rushing don't apologise

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no need to worry. We all make mistakes :pinkiesad2:

This chapter was pretty kinky I should say
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6779903 nothing beats thai food and sushi after a little sessiom of "stress relief" :rainbowlaugh:

Be that as it may," she replies with a taken a back tone at your attitude. "You do well to keep those words of wisdom in mind Mr. Anon, and keep that nose clean around here or I'll Principal Celestia and vice Principal Luna clean it for you." She says with a wave of her hand... Bully reference maybe? It sounds like it:pinkiegasp:

6818167 not intentionally, it just sounded like something she'd say to me

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Why? I've read 'worse' stories than this, moderation wise. This is actually pretty tame. You got something against tagging your story with sex or something?

6843106 wah?...oh no not because of that. Its because he first draft which is this versions second chapter, got rejected rejected for "not being related to the mlp universe. So I had to write and resubmit it like this to get it past them.

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I guess that makes some sense but... I've still read stories that tried less hard to be MLP related. I mean honestly it has Luna in it, what more do you need? You can't argue with the mighty devs I guess.

To sum up my experience reading this, hard as a rock encased in galvanized steel in the center of a diamond.

Please don't take this the wrong way, but I strongly suggest you get an editor.

6899362 its the damn phone i write with mostly, i intend on getting a lot of these flukes fixed omce i have a proper computer monitor

6907294 Well no wonder there are so many errors. Use a computer next time.

6907537 hey i didnt OWN a computer untill just yesterday, be thankful I have a way to write at all would really be appreciated :flutterrage:

6907934 Whoa! I;m not dissing you or anything. No offense meant.
Congratz on the new computer, by the way.

6908276 oh...im sorry defender, i just misread the prior comments...im sorry..:fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

Hee hee, im the 69th person to like this. :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug:

~ADG

6907294 That...that is beyond impressive. Your dedication is inspiritng

A few spelling mistakes here and there, but overall, it's a great story.

Dang it I wish I went to this school. Good story, some spelling mistakes here and there, but I can relate.

7336033 Thank you i love hearing...well reading comments like yours

I see you went with Sylvester McCoy. :pinkiehappy:

"Gee, I'm sorry I'm not on the same wavelength as your sister's favorite, the transfer case from Crystal Prep, what was her name? Twilight? Luna doesn't seem angry at your comment, but she does give you a look.

Yeah twilight you teachers pet and celestia always playing favorites.

"Mr. Anon, its not like that at all, I'm not saying you need to be comparing yourself to anyone else, your perfect just the way you are, and you ARE a good student, I only ask that you try and be a GREAT student." She says before placing a hand on your shoulder and using her free one to mae ypu look into her eyes. She always was the more compassionate and loving of the principal sisters. She was more the cool older sister to the students while her actual sister was more a strict but caring mother.

Best princess and best principal

"Come now Mr. Anon, I thought you said you knew how to play?" She says giving her whip a little crack, teasing but still noticeable in the low light of her office candle light.

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"Nothing...it's not important." She smiles and helps her self to more noodles as you get back to your curry beef with rice. You can see in her eyes that she knows what you meant to say, and you both can hardly wait for the last bell.

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