You own a boarding house for beautiful mare monsters. This couldn't end badly, or sexy, at all, could it?
I'm getting a monster musume vibe from this
7733853
Same here
Well, this story certainly has caught my attention.
Im confused, the tag says anthro but Flutters fur is brown, wouldnt she have her normal yellow colored fur?Also, really nice story, a bit short but really good.
That present tense trigger warning though.
Someone's on a downvote spree...
Also noticed some slip-ups, mind if I point them out?
7734038 As explained in the chapter, this Fluttershy is wolfenkin. In other words, an eqwolf. That's why brown fur.
7734580 Alrighty then.
you saw now sort of toy or anything
I guess the 'now' should be 'no', altough I don't get the point of the sentence.
and make the
Tenses... is what I would say, though I can't say exactly why. Just sounds wrong to me.
It as obvious
'was', forgot a letter there.
and it seems that her current attempt isn’t working
Eh... what exactly isn't working? I mean, if it wasn't her purpose to get him hard, then what?
Fluttershy’s throat as it closes around her.
Wait, what closes around her? I get that his dick gets enclosed by her mouth, but you said 'she', so I don't know where you were going with this?
her.body.
you’re awake probably
I argue that the more common order here is "you're probably awake (now)".
I'm getting a monster musume vibe from this
7733853
Same here
Well, this story certainly has caught my attention.
Im confused, the tag says anthro but Flutters fur is brown, wouldnt she have her normal yellow colored fur?
Also, really nice story, a bit short but really good.
That present tense trigger warning though.
Someone's on a downvote spree...
Also noticed some slip-ups, mind if I point them out?
7734038
As explained in the chapter, this Fluttershy is wolfenkin. In other words, an eqwolf. That's why brown fur.
7734580 Alrighty then.
I guess the 'now' should be 'no', altough I don't get the point of the sentence.
Tenses... is what I would say, though I can't say exactly why. Just sounds wrong to me.
'was', forgot a letter there.
Eh... what exactly isn't working? I mean, if it wasn't her purpose to get him hard, then what?
Wait, what closes around her? I get that his dick gets enclosed by her mouth, but you said 'she', so I don't know where you were going with this?
I argue that the more common order here is "you're probably awake (now)".