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Mending Cup Cake's Broken Heart

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creonman

creonman #1 · Mar 17th, 2016 · · ·

i cant thumb this one way another, too many grammar mistakes. but it is a good story.j

SOG AVENGER 225

SOG AVENGER 225 #2 · Mar 17th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Death leaves heartache no one can heal
Love leaves a memory no one can steal

gojiralagan1995

gojiralagan1995 #3 · Mar 17th, 2016 · · ·

7038086 yeah like I said it is my first time making a clopfic you should have seen the one before foals was goals I was laughing my ass off when I found that out and I still am XD

Shadicbro Brony

Shadicbro Brony #4 · Mar 17th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Wow bro. This was pretty good. Not bad for your first clop story. Keep working on your grammar. It was little edgy, but this was a good clop story, especially for your first time.

gojiralagan1995

gojiralagan1995 #5 · Mar 17th, 2016 · · ·

7038616 thanks shadicbro that means something when its coming from the maker of EHS

PinkiePieFox #6 · Mar 17th, 2016 · · ·

DAMN HAMSTER #7 · Mar 18th, 2016 · · 1 ·

Oh, that grammar...

gojiralagan1995

gojiralagan1995 #8 · Mar 18th, 2016 · · ·

7040395 yeah I know I'm working on it man

gojiralagan1995

gojiralagan1995 #9 · Mar 18th, 2016 · · ·

7040395 now I have fixed it so there you go

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jayJay

jayJay #11 · May 4th, 2016 · 2 · ·

7040649
it's only a bit rushed it otherwise it's a great story

Summer Doors #12 · May 4th, 2017 · · ·

This need a sequle

Damien Darkside

Damien Darkside #13 · May 21st, 2017 · 2 · ·

Ohhh. Spelling mistakes on the description. That usually is a great sign.

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