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TheTalentlessPony


I make fanfiction sometimes. Just call me 'Talentless'.

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Pinkie Pie was bizarre. She talked about many things that ponies didn't understand. She teleported from place to place. She even spoke of strange creatures who watch her recorded moves and write stories about her!

But today, Pinkie Pie was not bizarre. She was sad, and she lets the only other person available know why.

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Comments ( 29 )

Kind of sad, but glad to see that this has a happy ending :twilightsmile:

May God go with you :ajsmug::raritystarry::rainbowdetermined2:

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Thanks! Yeah, I could never give Pinkie Pie a sad ending. :twilightsmile:

That was pretty good, Kinda makes you wonder the right way to deal with someone who could break the 4th wall.

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Thanks! And yes, that was my intention~ :pinkiehappy:

All. Hail. Best. Pony.

I was expecting this to be some kind of silly story, and it turned out quite deep instead. I like it!

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I'm very glad you weren't disappointed! :twilightsmile:

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And I love writing deep stories! :pinkiehappy:

I don't get to do it often though; you know, gotta keep the people surprised and everything.

But, when the opportunity presents itself, I do indeed like writing deep. :rainbowkiss:

that was pretty deep. and meta. gotta say i loved it :twilightsmile:

If it were that easy, a bunch of authors would write, "And Pinkie Pie, realizing what was going on, opened a hole through reality and emerged into the author's universe. 'Hi!' exclaimed Pinkie Pie, jumping the author." The newspaper reported an invasion of hundreds of pink miniature horses the following day.

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Ohhh, the hilarity that would ensue. :derpytongue2:

This was an interesting form of using the fourth wall. Not many writers write it as a serious topic as this. Congratulations!:pinkiehappy:

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Yay, thank you! :twilightsmile:

This was actually written on a whim when I wondered to myself what Pinkie Pie would do to the fourth wall on a bad day, so I'm glad people enjoy it!

What if Pinkie Pie actually did invade our world? Oh, the chaos...

THE BEAUTIFUL AND ADORABLE CHAOS!!!!!!!

:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

On rereading, though I realize this might not be the intent, I think you answered a lot of questions that Christians are asked with amazing precision. Questions like "Why does God let bad days happen?" or "Why doesn't God just make all people be good?"

Whether intentionally or no, TTP, you've helped build my faith. I love this. :twilightsmile: :heart:

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Thank you! I was actually raised by a Christian family, so interesting that you bring that up. :)

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Huh, that actually explains a couple things. Quite a few teachings must've stuck! :pinkiesmile:

God bless you, TTP: you do amazing work. :twilightsmile:

This is one of the best stories I've read! It's deep, but it's also adorable and very well written! :pinkiehappy: stupendous job!!

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Wow, thanks! :D I'm so glad people like this!

I was kind of skeptical coming into this story because I normally avoid sad fics. But let me tell you, I was blown away by this! Not many people write Pinkie or the fourth wall in a serious way, so seeing them both at the same time is great! Needless to say you have definitely earned a like and a spot in my best of the best folder!:pinkiesmile:

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Oh, thank you! I very much appreciate it! And yeah, I avoid sad fics as well, so I definitely tried not to delve really far down into the sad territory, and more into the deeper aspects. Glad you enjoyed it!

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