• Member Since 8th Aug, 2011
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huntersunday


I read, I stalk, I Write, and one day one of my stories will be featured. That is all

Comments ( 24 )

Is the spelling error in the title intentional?

7866901 I believe its an attempt to phonetically replicate Applejack's accent.

Okay, this is a decent story with an interesting premise to it.

You acknowledge you need an editor and you do, so I won't harp on that. There are spelling errors here and there, and in places you shorten Applejack to AJ unnecessarily.

On the other hand though it was well paced and nicely structured, and I do like AppleDagio.

I've been wanting more of Applejack and the Dazzlings like this since forever! Loved every minute of it!

7867016 thankyou, I plan on still getting it touched up

7867100 your welcome it seems to be doing good so far

I'll read it later but I just want to know : who is the futa, AJ or the dazzlings?

That... Was hot!

This was really hot. I would love to see more.

Will you continue the story?

Needs alot of touch ups but good premise, hot as hell. Sequel?

7868390 theres been alot of people wanting that so maybe I tried to get it fully edited but it was taking way long

7868477
Dude just send it at me. Editing a 5k word long thing would take like... a day.

i'm loving the new character tags

Damn! Hope there is more after this!

7870540 there's a really good chance :pinkiehappy:

As great as this was, was the bold and italics really necessary? it was kinda distracting.

Enjoyed this a lot more than expected, but the ending left me really curious. Think there's any chance for a sequel? And if not, would you mind if I were to write something based off this idea?

8145344 yes there is one and you can use the idea as log as you give a shout out to the origin

🎶 SHE'S GOT BIG BALLS 🎶:applejackunsure:

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