• Member Since 8th Aug, 2011
  • offline last seen Jun 13th, 2018

huntersunday


I read, I stalk, I Write, and one day one of my stories will be featured. That is all

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Love can be a small tiny gust of wind or the most powerful force in the universe. Twilight and Applejack have been given a golden opportunity to explore these new feelings. A simple mistake will finally open one of their eyes to something amazing. Watch as as the two form a love strong enough that it wont only conquer time, it may even cheat death.


A shout out to my editor General Tullius
This is my entry to a Twijack contest please enjoy
artwork by AwesomeSauce78 here is his Deviantart

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 72 )

What a nice start to a story! I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter :twilightsmile:

This is adorable! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Well, so far it isn't bad. Not sure if I should follow this story though.

7780733 Thanks I think you will enjoy the future adorableness :rainbowkiss:

Good so far. I'm ready for more!

Twijack should have more fics so it's great to see this :ajsmug: :heart: :twilightblush:

7780813 well thats up to you but thanks for the comment

Wait what? A new chapter every day? Woah there buddy, slow down. It's not like this story is going to go anywhere if you don't update it constantly. Take your time and focus on writing it as best as you can. Don't want you to go brain-dead after just a few days. (Unless you have them stock-piled up, then just ignore this comment.)

7782273 i will try not to go brain dead but i have 4 chaps just needing to be typed

I just love the daily chapters!

...And that this chapter was super cute didn't hurt either :twilightblush:

Keep up the good work!

Lovely chapter looking forward to the next

That last scene was soooo adorable! Keep up the good work, though you might want to consider getting an editor.

7784517 thanks, I have a editor I'll ask him too look into it agian

7786698 it was yours but my editor seems to have disappeared might not make it

7787048 oh right the contest was a disaster anyway i'm pretty sure almost everyone was turned away by not trusting the prices

7787127 its cool it gave me the idea for this story so yay

I really like the setup you got going here. I don't like it when people write twilight as oblivious to her own feelings and to her respective ship. Good work, and can't wait for more!

7788595 thanks I agree she needs to learn :twilightsheepish:

7789056 I'm a sucker for TwiJack. Even the smallest smile at each other makes me happy. A full-blown kiss? You, sir or ma'am, have reached the ultra-d'aww territory.

I just have to point out your usage of human terms in this story (AKA hand). You should use "hoof" instead. Other than that and sone other small grammatical errors, this was a great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.

I agree with Dash32 and Vex Ether. Another great chapter! I can't stop aww'ing; it is almost becoming an issue :twilightsmile:

Aww...Not again. Please help me

Yet another d'aww. This story keeps breaking my d'aww-o-meter!

Does that mean Pinkie is an Ace? That would be unconventional but I can roll with it and it's a nice bit of character for her. :)

7792330 an ace? Don't get it :twilightoops:
7792134
There is more daw to come :pinkiehappy:

7792548
An Ace in this context is someone who is asexual, no real interesting in anyone of any sex.

7792846 oh no that's not it at all don't worry about hint will come soon

Next two chapters are ready to go. Just waiting for them to get edited :pinkiehappy:

Looking forward for the rest.

Not enough for that tag.

In the comedy version of this chapter:

* AJ becomes violently ill each time Twi teleports with her; but by the end of the evening she's getting used to it, and the vomiting is purely a brief formality.
* The mirror portal works perfectly! But it still turns ponies into humans. Better work on that, Twi!

:rainbowlaugh:

what the hell is with these ships raridash, Macora, what next lunapie

7800513 close but i already hinted at Pinkie’s twice now

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