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A couple of one shot, 2nd person stories to where you get friendzoned and in extreme cases abused by various ponies. These aren't as light hearted as some of the other stories on here, hence the sad tag. I'll start with a chapter for each of the mane 6 and will add other ponies based on demand and how comfortable I feel in portraying that specific pony. Hope you enjoy! 
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I liked it. Its nice to see a story ware the random human doesn't get with the pony of there dreams. Not everything needs a happy ending like that.
As for other ponies you should do. We both know you're gona get requests for the usual suspects, So I'm goan go and request Fleur de Lis and or Queen Chrysalis. I know not the most requested ponies, but I like em both and it would be nice to see.
7779114 Thank you, that's exactly what I was going for. More of a realism approach. As for your requests, I think I could do Queen Chrysalis but not too sure about Fleur. It would be an interesting challenge, so I think I'll try it. First things first, need to finish the mane 6.
7779156 Take your time, I saw you were gona do the main 6 first, but figured it would be best to throw them out there now before it everything gets clogged up with fifty people asking for you to do the other princesses. (Don't get me wrong you should do them).
This made me sad and warm hearted at the same time. Keep it up.
7781138 Thank you. I'm glad I was able to make you feel that way and I hope you enjoy the other one's that I post.
At least there letting him down gently so far.
7782486 Yeah, I think for most of the ponies I will write, they would be too nice to do anything other than let you down slowly. (I tried for second person but it seems I'm being a little too specific in my dialogue .
) Maybe Rainbow Dash might, as she would see being in a relationship as "uncool" and sometimes she can be a bit crude in dealing with things. (Also not trying to bash on her, just that's how I see her.) I could make the human desperate, but that seems demeaning to the reader, since the human is supposed to be you. I don't know, still playing around with some ideas for right now. Thank you for the feedback, it really does help. 
7782518 I agree with you they would be gentle. And if anyone wasn't it would be Dash. I don't see her as mean persay just she lacks tact and tends to blurt things out before she thinks it all the way through. (Tho I also see her coming back and apologizing and trying to smooth things out once she realizes what she did. They are friends after all.)
That dose make scene in a Pinkie way.
I really thought more people wold have made requests. I can give you some more. Snset Shimmer, Starlight Glimmer Lyra, Bon Bon, Octavia, Vynal, Gilda, Zecora, Ember Cherilee, Spitfire. the CMC (tho you might want to age them up so it doesn't get awkward) Diamond Tiara Silver Spoon (again might want to age them up.
Im sure I can come up with more, thees are just the ones that came to me off hand.
moonbutt! moonbutt!
Thanks for dong it I liked it. I think you portrayed Chryssie pretty good, at least the way I see her. I feel the reason shes the way she is is ether she's scared of showing weakness or shes been hurt in the past. (My head cannon can pretty much explain everything but the transformation they did at the end of the season. I can explain it if you want.)
And yeah I might ave gone a little overboard with requesting almost everyone. But hey no one else was so I did it for them. I'm enjoying it to much to have it just stop like that.
7836681 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I guess the whole ploy of the request was just to get my readers involved. I do enjoy hearing their thoughts, even if they don't like the story. Any feedback that helps me write better is appreciated. Feel free to pm me your headcannon, can help me write her for my other story, Glimmer of Hope.
I say you do Luna next. Or spitfire.
This, makes me SAD
7941052 I'm a bit confused here. You attack my other fic and myself, but are fine with these fics?
7942954 That's because the harem and the wolf-sona in your other fic. Those are the things that I don't like it!! But this was great and a bit sad.
7779114 I don't agree with you.
8086732 I respect your opinion but not everything has a happy ending. Something can be sad but sill be good.
If you post more I'll read more.Like I said once before not everything needs a happy ending.
I'd like to see more.
Pls more
Yeah you did her justice.
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Glad you liked it. Not sure who to do next.
That went almost exactly as I was expecting. Right down to her reasoning. In fact the only one that deviated at all from my predictions was "me", ironically enough.
Laugh it up while you can, chili meat.
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Yeah, I guess that's the problem with 2nd person, hard to make it tailored to everyone. Thanks for leaving a comment!
Huh... these are pretty good.
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Thank you.
Pinkie Logic:
pii-nk-ee · lah-jiic, noun.
A manner of thinking and reasoning that is irrefutable, but unconventional. Also applies to the laws of reality.
And you nailed it.
Huh... perhaps it's just because I'm a Fluttercord shipper, but I actually thought that ending was pretty funny.
If you're still accepting requests, maybe try one where it's Anon that turns down the pony?
This is actually a very unique idea for a story! Keep on writing it. XD
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I did have a certain somepony in mind, but I was gonna end these with her. 
Interesting idea. Any specific
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I'd like to suggest either Starlight Glimmer, or Fleur de Lis for that one.
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Hmm, Fleur was requested earlier, and it would be fun to try and write her... Alright! I'll do it!
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Yay!
I like it.
That was pretty good. I liked the change on things.
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Thank you both.
That's not friendzoning. That's manipulation spiced with a dash of abuse leading to a breakup.
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yeah, this one was a bit heavy on the punishment, honestly I didn't like putting Fleur in that position, but decided just to experiment
A normal man would be going on a killing spree right about now after the last chapter.
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Heh well this is sort of an anon mixed with the reader, and knowing our favorite green asshole, this wouldn't warrant a murder spree. Thank you for reading and your comment!
Why couldn’t I just confess to her now? It’s not like Twilight wants to fully reject my love. If she wants to love me, then so be it.