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Mewrilah


There is always hope, even in the darkest of times, all it takes is a brave soul to find it

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After falling from Princess Luna’s grace, you, a simple Bat pony tasked to represent your race, are relocated to the castle walls. As part of your punishment, you encounter menial tasks such as cleaning of the barracks and various guard armors. Tonight was the first night in months your fellow guards have trusted you enough to do something beyond these simplistic chores. As the night passes and your head hits the pillow in the day, even in your dreams you find no peace.

Now, however, you will see that your chance for redemption has come in the form of the mare you hurt worst. Will you screw this up just as badly and lose the only pony who ever stuck by your side through your ordeals? Or will you rekindle your lost feelings for one another and finally atone for your mistakes?

Written for the 2017 CategoricalGrant’s CuddleFic Competition. Written in collaboration with Shadow Rift..

Coverart by Soulscapecreatives

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

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good, good.

that song is from the halloween movie, Hocus Pocus. i do like that fan animation, but I wonder how many people will recangnize it. I loved the read, though. Keep up the better work than i could muster

So good but only a few hundred words of cuddles...I'm wounded!

Second person synopsis killed that dead for me. Tell ME I screwed up, will you?
Nah. Not happening. Maybe someone enjoys imaging themselves hapless and clueless. Someone else.

This felt odly relatable.:moustache:

Nice little fic. Could use some clean up but further enjoyable.:twilightsmile:

So this fared well in the contest. You should submit it to the Reviewers Cafe.

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I find it funny that you suggested this story be submitted just based off a mention in a forum post. You didn't even take the time to read it for yourself and realize that it was too "grammatically erroneous". Yet you gave it praise. So congratulations in wasting both of our time, you writing the review and me reading it. Go ahead and send it to your firing squad, hopefully they have good aim.

P.S. If you're going to make claims, at least give examples. I know I can't get a scientific paper published without having evidence.

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This "critic" again???
Lol "firing squad"?
Let's hope they have better equipment than the "gun collection" listed on his profile or it'll be a pretty sad affair!
:rainbowlaugh:

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So this fared well in the contest. You should submit it to the Reviewers Cafe so that I may wipe my anus upon it profusely.

Lol

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I knew where the song was from lol also plz sequel?

This fit legit actually made my cry because of what this guy (me so to say) was going through and how bad he felt. I honestly wouldn’t be surprised if he actually tried to take his own life only to be stopped by other guards. Overall this fic was absolutely perfect my man! 20/10

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Well thank you for the kind words. I'll have to say it was quite interesting having not just my input go into a story. Overall I got lucky with the guy I worked with, we just had that synergy. If you liked this, I'm sure you'll love the new collab coming out along with my other stories. :twilightsmile:

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