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Starlitomega


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Applejack loves Pinkie Pie, but she's getting awfully tired of the disapproving looks some of the ponies in Ponyville are giving them.

Fortunately, she's done a little research of her own...

Short and fluffy romance, as is my specialty. Long live ApplePie!

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Comments ( 13 )
MJP
MJP #1 · Nov 3rd, 2016 · · 24 ·

Ew

Ha!

I like it.

Perfect retort and perfect ending. Granted Rarijack is OTP, but AJ's just in top form here and the story feels warm.

MJP
MJP #4 · Nov 4th, 2016 · · 15 ·

7693865 RariJack IMHO is an abusive relationship waiting to happed

7694026

That's a fine opinion. Fine opinion.

Let me offer a rebuttal: Shut up. :trollestia:

7693737
Thank you! I don't know why, but the idea got stuck in my head, yet I never got around to actually writing it until now.


7693865
I like RariJack, *cough cough* but that won't stop me from trying other ships. I'm not sure why I like the idea of ApplePie so much. Maybe it's because it's such an underdog ship, or they're both earth ponies, but I like to imagine how Pinkie might change Applejack's day in/day out routine.
Or maybe it's because I like shipping Pinkie with everyone.

Either way, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to read it and let me know!

lol. at the end there was an ad for a brony dating site, and it has Pinkie and AJ kissing.

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THAT'S WHAT WE CALL SYNERGY IN THE SHIPPING BUSINESS SON!

Whoever made those ads has great taste.

This is so cute! I have to agree with Aurora Dimmet, great ending!

Nice work!

This was a wonderful and romantic story that I have enjoyed very much. I like how you had AJ looked into the records for information on who is waiting giving into her character of honesty as well more than a farmhand feel great story. Also towards the end where she cheers Pinkie Pie up with a raspberry utterly fluttered my brony heart this one is for the books I say thank you.

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Thank you! I know these uncommon ships will never get much attention, so anytime someone lets me know they enjoyed it, it makes it all worthwhile.

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A lot of people like to cast AJ as a stereotypical dumb character, but the truth is , she's not dumb, she just isn't very book smart. AJ is the kind of pony that would do anything for her family, even research. As for the ending, I didn't actually know how to end it. While I was writing the bit where Pinkie is sort of sitting contemplatively, my left wallpaper shifted to this: derpicdn.net/img/view/2013/6/17/350893__safe_pinkie+pie_applejack_edit_tickling_applepie_raspberry_tummy+buzz_artist-colon-holsternicholson_belly+buzz.png
And then boom, and ending was born.
Thanks for letting me know what you think and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

7702452 Uncommon certainly doesn't mean bad, especially when it's written well! I've seen ApplePie and AppleShy fics, RariPie and others that were really really enjoyable. I have my preferences, and some mane 6 ships I just don't care for, but there are those few that I just have to say 'Wow, I could totally see that working...and it's so sweet!'. Yours was certainly one of those! Keep on a'shippin! :pinkiehappy:

7693700 What an insightful argument.

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