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Starlitomega


Kissy honses

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Pinkie Pie loves the serene music Lyra plays at night. When Hearts and Hooves day comes along though, the music stops. Pinkie decides it’s time to find out what happened to the gentle music that helped her find rest after countless nights.

Short LyraPie shipfic I've had rattling around for a long time now.

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Not everyday you see something like this.

Quite well done, as well!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Shitpost achieved!

It's always great to see a ship I've never seen before. Never even thought of these two together.

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To be honest, I didn't think of this either. I bought two funko minis and ended up getting a Lyra and a Pinkie. One of the guys in my skype group said I should ship them. Despite trying to shake it from my mind, being a Pinkie shipper stuck it there, and so I couldn't help myself!

Thank you for taking the time to read it!


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Maybe you should get in on that top secret project I have in the works...

This is not poo-pony, you raging faggot... I am disappoint.

Pretty good. Not quite as poignant or gripping as I was hoping for, but it has some good moments.

The only real critique I have is that the issue of Lyra and Bon Bon's singles night was a bit unclear when it was brought up. My first assumption was that they were actually a couple and just preferred to spend Hearts and Hooves at home. It didn't become clear to me until Pinkie brought up Lyra being single. A bit of a clarification there might be in order.

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You need to crap all over cookie and key. They are the ones holding back the top secret project!

7945547
Honestly, the fact that there wasn't much more to the story is what nagged me and kept me from posting it for so long. In the end I decided I could either leave it in my docs for eternity, or just post what I have now. I'll look into that thing you mentioned. I need to make sure it's clear that they're just the best of friends and not a couple or it would definitely be confusing. Thank you for taking the time for reading and giving me that valuable info, I hope you enjoyed it decently even with its flaws.

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It's not a bad fanfic at all. I personally prefer rather high-concept stories with more dramatic turns, both for reading and writing, but there is nothing wrong with a simple plot.

(I particularly enjoyed Pinkie basically going: "I didn't just ask you out at random, I actually like you.")

And yeah, when Lyra brought up Bon Bon, I momentarily went: "Wait, are they going to break up, then?" It's a small thing, but worth noting.

Nice, simple and sweet. I like it.

I - I mean, WE -, this site and the whole world need more romantic, fluffy pink party pony!
Thank you for serving the greater good - chorus: the greater good! - and thank you for this wonderful piece. :twilightsmile:

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