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Flash_Magnus


(Previously known as Lunar Night) On a quest to read 10,000 pony stories from this website. Current total as of April 5,2020 is 7,202 stories.

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After pranking her commanding officer one too many times. Night Wing decides to get back at Echo with the one thing that will sure cause chaos: The Laser Pointer!

He's going to have so much fun with that thing.

It's gonna suck for the maid ponies that will have to clean up all that mess afterwards.

Please read below this before moving onto the story
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Edit: Sweet! This made it to the Popular Stories section (10-31-2016)

Finally! I do a story that's not human-to-pony.

1. Why am I doing this? Well, it's because I have an Echo page and very randomly throughout the last three to five months, I've been posting random pranking moments between myself (Since I run the Echo page) and Night Wing or just having fun with him which is Here , Here , Here , Here , Here , And Here

But, it was this post that gave me the idea of trying my luck at doing this laser pointer story with Night Wing getting back at Echo with said item with the post being this one.

Also, Night Wing is a commanding officer bat guard that I briefly mentioned in First Night on the Job

I also know there are other laser pointer stories which I've read and loved which are these The Laser Pointer and Princess Celestia and the Laser Pointer

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2. I'm super happy that I was able to get a fan that likes my Echo page to help edit the story for me because he added stuff that I never thought I would have added.

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3. What's my expectations? For a story that's not human-to-pony. I just hope that people can just love this silly/random story. If this somehow got 50 likes then I would call that an accomplishment since I'm not asking for much.

I'm just curious if anypony that normally be on the bat pony thread, Echo fans or maybe Zee66 read this, would they like it? Only time will tell... I'm pretty sure I got Echo's character down well enough I think.

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4. I guess to end this. If you happened to see any errors that my editor missed then just let me know and I'll go to fix it.

Hopefully you'll enjoy this.

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Comments ( 15 )

Are you submitting this for the writing competition if so please put it in the 2016 competition folder

7685084

I was wondering about that but, I think I'll pass.

5/10 needs more Eventide.

7685328

I don't know her character well enough to even add her in this story :derpytongue2:

The last thing I need is messing that up.

I find the storry amazing just i feel like there could be more explanation during the chase and all the pranks that happend before but otherwise 9/10 because little detail but still awesome

8574441

Hmm... true! I could have.

But, thank you for liking it regardless :twilightsmile:

This was amusing.

8980246

I'm happy to know that you liked it :twilightsmile:

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You’re welcome.

Do a sequel where they prank Celestia.

Literally had me like, :rainbowlaugh: the whole time. Please please pleeeease do a sequel.

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Glad you enjoyed the story!

But, I don't really think I'll ever come back to this story to make a sequel since work takes up my time nowadays.

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