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Flash_Magnus


(Previously known as Lunar Night) On a quest to read 10,000 pony stories from this website. Current total as of April 5,2020 is 7,202 stories.

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This story is a sequel to A Day in the Life of Lunar Night


Story is kinda.. "eh" so do keep that in mind if you want to read this sequel. I did a better job on the main story anyway.

Mission Objective: Do our Job and find Prince Blueblood to find out why he has been avoiding bat ponies and us more in general.

Come to find that the reason for him avoiding us is very unexpected and so interesting that we'll be surprised. We love our job so much if it means that we can be his personal guards in the end.

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Romance tag is there for a reason :eeyup:

This story takes place about three weeks after A Day in the Life of Lunar Night and about a week after Lunar and Night meet the Mane Six

This is the last story in the Lunar Night series... I guess I can call it that and last overall which I will explain in the authors notes. Of course since this story is unedited I really hope it's not too distracting for any readers.

The idea for why Blueblood was afraid of bat ponies was a random one and worked at the same time so I just went along with it since it made sense.

This story is rated Teen for sexual moments, but nothing explicit.

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6574291

Well thanks, I'm glad you think of me that way :twilightsmile:

But seeing as though this story has 3 likes and 6 dislikes is really annoying since I'm wondering what's so bad with this one and the previous one

Then again, I'm sure those 6 are from people who never read the story and gave it a dislike regardless. There are people like that on this site.

Aside from that, I have no plans to make anymore stories since I love reading what others put on here more so that's what I'm sticking with.

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Writing is not my strong point, but I know my stories aren't that bad.

6574291

I have your story bookmarked for a future read :eeyup:

Again, not my favoured instalment. A bit too heavy on the 'everyone has gay sex'. It was kinda the whole goal of the story, which is why it wasn't my favourite. *shrugs* And a bit fast passed. Mind you, it was a one shot, so that part was understandable.

6590456

Yeah... M/M shipping isn't for everypony heh :eeyup: but when I was trying to figure out what to do with this story, that idea came up so I just went along with it. The homeless pony scene was a recent idea also.

I guess it being fast paced or sorts did it well. Even though I'm sure I could of added more stuff for Night and I to do. I just couldn't think of anything.

Blueblood was acting that way towards Rarity because he secretly likes stallions ... :trollestia:

6591151 It's not so much the shipping as it is that fact that, due to the fast pace, there was little else beside the shipping. The story concept is interesting, and honestly went a totally different direction than I expected, but the pacing didn't add much to the story aside from 'Lunar and Night set up more gay sex'. Even the whole reason for Blueblood's issue was brushed over in two or three paragraphs. I found myself skipping over lines for that reason.

6591174

Well that's understandable and when I think of it more, I actually could expand upon his issue in like a 1,500 word one-shot since the idea is right there and I can add a lot more to it. But, I'm done with writing stories. I ain't good enough at it and that's why I'll just stick to reading what others write on here.

I guess I could of done an even better job with it and I just didn't. Good but not good enough.

6591207 You won't get better if you give up :raritydespair: You improve with effort! Don't make me pull out a Kamina or Simon speech! I will!

6591220

>.> XD

Maybe someday when my writing skills improve and I have an actual good story plot, then I'll make something :moustache: