A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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That's gonna come back and bite a little harder than it should've.
Well it was so Metal
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Indeed...
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Hmm. I thought it was satisfying up until she referred to the Wonderbolts as a joke. Then it all went farther than it should've.
Luna just went full CIA Blacksite on spitfire, Fucking A+.
The Princess of priorities just struck down the captain of weenie hut jr
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I believe this too while justified now she has no reason not to talk besides nightmares but even then I the damage would be done those nobles would buy it and they would be screwed
Damn, just damn.
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For Luna or spitfire?
DAMN FUCKING RRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGHHHHHHTTTTTTT!!! Luna don't take shit like that from anyone.
well.......that just happened
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It's likely to be Luna with the greater damage, Spitfire's already taken enough with more on the way if Luna gets her hooves on her again.
"Nopony walks over me!"
Is that Luna's equivelant of this line of dialog by the late great Adam West from Family Guy?
https://m.Dear Spitfire.
You want Pegasi?
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Now Those, are Pegasi.
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Correction: Captain of Super Wenie Hut Junior's.
In Equestria you don't blackmail the princesses
The princesses blackmail you
This is so not right spitfire please Go to Celestia.
Well, that was to be expected. Not the 'torture and eternal suffering/ nightmare' thing, but that Luna would take care of Spitfire. You do not just blackmail one of the two royal sisters and get away with it.
Was Luna's response harsh? Completely.
Maybe even cruel? Sure.
Justified? In the greater scheme of things, yes.
Luna was right with saying that the Wonderbolts are not really military (or solely 'moral boost' as she called them) like the Rangers. The only good thing Spitfire and the Bolts were doing in the Gryphon War was playing scouts and messengers for the biggest part of their time there (and when John develops good binoculars or Walky-Talkies even these tasks are taken care off and they are not needed anymore in war at all). And what happened? They were celebrated like the Wonderbolts marched into the heart of the enemie and conquered them because of their reputation as stunt flyers. Their air shows made them favourites of many Ponies, yes. BUT... only, because they bring joy and entertainment, not military strength.
Enemies with guns and other distance weapons can just shoot the Wonderbolts from the sky and give them a VERY inglorious demise in form of blood and agony. Their little flight suits don't give them any form of protection against bullets and I'm sure only Rainbow Dash (and even that not for to long) could dodge bullets, but the rest? That's like pigeon shooting for the enemies. (Darksiders references for the win!).
The only thing I'm not sure about is how Celestia (should she get to know about it) would react over the whole thing. I'm sure she won't like it at all that Luna practically scared her (former, in the future?) Wonderbolt Captain for life, justified or not.
well, that went real dark real quick.......
i like
This just goes to show. Don't fuck with alicorns
I love this one, and how Luna can be such a bad ass when she wants
This whole thing is going to go south in a hurry and there's noone to blame but themselves
I don't like this Luna. This is going to come back and bite her in the flank. And John's definitely going to find out. He's not stupid. He knows Spitfire well enough to know that she wouldn't just give the funding back.
luna just went full derp.... this is going to bite her in the arse so hard
Okay this story was decent... but now its just going into the realm of stupid. Luna turning Spitfire into a broken mare and injuring her? No I just don't see this happening. I really REALLY think you need to tone down this nonsense
One word to describe Luna: Orwellian
Obviously Luna's overreacted here, but her main point stands, she did attempt to blackmail a princess and a fellow officer. Also the reasoning behind the funding is valid.
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It happened in a dream and she was just making a point to spitfire, don't fuck with the princess
I love Nightmare Moon. Also, could this entire event have been avoided if Luna and John locked the door to their room?
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I'm always amazed that people don't understand what alternate universe means. This is NOT the show. I don't see characters getting murdered horribly or f*cking in the show either but, again, this is not the show. If more realism and different takes on characters is upsetting to you, maybe stick to the rated T and lower stories. I get it, we all have our ideal notions of who the characters should be and how they should act, but these characters are not ours, this is Bobbybrony's world. Get the reference? Heh.
Her reasons and charges against spitfire were definitely legitimate. But her actions...... she's mentally unstable, and John if he ever finds out, should definitely be wary........ I know I for sure would be.
Honestly if the situation was just slightly different I be with Spitfire, but honestly using Luna and John’s relationship as an excuse for lack of funding and blackmailing is a bad low.
I mean she was originally going to use the money for some new training techniques - WHAT NEW TECHNIQUES! Almost all known military forces are using some variant of ranged weapon, how is some new flying moves going to help with that from dodging dozens of shells the size of a finger from tearing you apart or a sniper round taking you out before you could hear it?!
If Spitfire went straight to Celestia or the other officers about their relationship rather than blackmail then maybe I would had stated it to be more Luna’s fault for not being upfront, or Celestia for not having some sort of reasoning for the sudden funding to the Rangers or why the Wonderbolts aren’t getting any.
Wow (que slow clap) you have successful managed to make spitfire drop from my number one place in favourite character because of the name being in relation to a legendary fighter aircraft to the bottom of favourite characters then back to the middle, like come on Luna, bit excessive don’t ya think, like chill, spawn in the weapons that John was developing and do a live demo station instead, aim to injure, not kill, maybe run over wing with a Sherman, or let close examination of f-35 afterburner midflight, nothing to excessive obviously