A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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I Love How he make twilight embarest.
Take them how/what you will.
Congrats john, you just got groped by a princess (even though she's not a human princess it still counts)
Chapter was decent. Rarity wasn't the over the top cliche she normally is demanding he strips, that was reserved for twilight. Seriously didn't think she would go the easy or hard way route but his turnabout was FairPlay.
The tense changing from past to present was a bit jarring, but I'm still eager to read more.
Really? I've seen this used as a plot point waaay too many times.
Try to not do this sort of thing in the future.
Hmm that doesn't really work... Horses have something like sixty percent of their weight on the front legs... That is one reason why they are relatively fuc*ed if they get issues with one leg.
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The muscles in the front legs would likely be geared to entirely forward/backward motion, so the sideways motion needed for arm wrestling would be pretty low. The back leg observation was solely because he was hit in the chest very hard with a buck, and wasn't hurt as bad by punches.
Damn all you writers here suck at using military or any type of a soldiers in action stories.
Tell that to Minecraft...
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Or ARK
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to be fair i find most authors suck at using soldiers in stories
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I'm just gonna say this, do soldiers get trained on what to do if they suddenly get sucked into a world of fairy tale creatures where the most they'll run into is some wild life or the occasional Tyrant and/or Cliché Villain... Because if they do then well I gotta give them a thumbs up for Over planning.