A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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I can only imagine how John feels right now, with nothing to do. But he's right about the base, they need it to help with the defense of Equestria.
8151114 Correction, MSGySgt. Hartman
Damn Son, you are updating quite alot as of lately
8151275 Can't work at the moment so I've had more time to work on this
If he complains about teh food, let Sweetiebelle cook? If he complains about the nurses, get Derpy in? If he complains about the accomodations, give him to Rarity? If he complains about being bored, give him to Twilight. for research purposes?
Alright bobby mate, I gotta tell you this is literally the best story I've read on this site yet. It's absolutly fucking amazing keep up the good work mate!
8153221 I wouldn't go that far
But I shall certainly try and keep it up
So, I've binged on this story for the last couple of days now after discovering it by happy accident in the 'recently updated' listing on the home page (I'm a sucker for all things military, so after I saw the unit insignia and read the desc I was like "yeah, let's do this".)
And you've definately got me hooked. Love John's characterisation, his personalisation, his expressions and mannerisms (the "off you/we fuck" reminds me of the ATO and his team from Bluestone 42). Love it all to pieces.
Keep up the great work!
8153357 The "off we fuck" was a reference to Bluestone 42.
That programme captures British army banter beautifully.
8153429 Yeah, I absolutely love the banter between characters. I just love military banter in general. Probably gonna be reading John's lines in bloody Nick's voice now though... oh well.
You know what John needs now though. An "Aussie" guard... ;)
8153357 1:46 is definitely John
Keep it up Bobby ur doing great work man.
Finally. Captain bandage is going to relax for once.
The green wienie is gonna strike
I don't understand why John keeps blaming himself. There is literally NOTHING that he did wrong. And in fact, if anyone besides Tirek and Discord is to blame, it's Celestia. Celestia forbid him from being told, so he couldn't kill Tirek when they first met. Celestia is the one that had Discord go after Tirek and actively forbid John from killing him. Then even Discord betrayed them, CELESTIA is the one that gave up all the strongest powers into the most inexperienced, innocent, and passive princess and this was powerless when Tirek walked in, and KILLED John before reviving him and corrupting him.
Celestia is 100% to blame for all of this. And if no one else, John and Luna should be the ones knowing this.
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Okay...whoooooo boy where to begin with this. Let's see. I'm pretty sure he JUST explained why he's blaming himself for spectres death. By his hands, she was killed, regardless of if he was in control. That fact along with the fact that it was his choice to stay in canterlot (and wtf did he think was gonna do anyways?), which led to him getting corrupted is what's eating at him. as for Celestia being blamed? At the time, John was still INJURED and forced to deal with THE IMMEDIATE THREAT TO HIS LIFE. Regardless of if he knew, he would still be in the same situation. The result of that was him getting really hurt. As for her sending discord at tirek? One, It's not her fault he turned on them. Two, OBVIOUSLY if you had watched the show, you would know that THAT'S WHAT HAPPENED IN THE CANON SHOW. Why wouldn't the author follow an episode if he wasn't gonna follow it how it went. Same reason for why THEY GAVE THE MAGIC TO TWILIGHT. IT HAPPENED IN THE SHOW . Most passive? It was with that alicorn magic that twi was able to hold her own against tirek in the first place which led to them reuniting and defeating tirek. If you watched the show, you would know. Celestia never forbid him from killing tirek, she ordered him to work with shining to try and protect the city, and lastly tirek did NOT kill John, he just caused him alot of pain, incapacitated him, then healed him and took over his mind. It's not Celestias fault for other people's actions, how can she be held accountable for tirek breaking out and trying to take over the world? How can she be held accountable for discord turning on them? If discord wasn't sent after tirek, he would have gone after him anyways, discord don't take orders from anyone. I have essentially just debunked your entire rant. Thank you, and good night.
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That just made my day hahaha! Cheers mate!
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What was it?