A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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Sunny felt right, but so does Luna. Least you aren't dragging it along like a twisted 80's anime triangle for several seasons
And for the record it doesn't have to be 24/7 romance or any other aspect just because the tag is there. It has different things at different times. And the romance can go however it is meant to go. My relationship has been romantic up front, tumultuous after that, and now a lovely mix of romance, arguing, love and fun mixed together. Trying to write about it is a challenge just to make it believable, so i applaud bobby's efforts and am willing to lend advice if he needs it. The whole story is epic, the romance need not have to be cookie-cutter nor generic. Crack on, as it were.
7828266 I won't be going overboard with it, they'll be aspects where it does take place. However realistically with John going away for select periods of time there will be breaks with the aspect of romance to allow the other elements to roll with the story.
Not to mention the possibility of his partner being busy for periods of time, like all true romances it won't be smooth sailing.
HUZZAH! Praise be the Princess of the Night! May Her Romance be as sweet as her evening sky!
Welp.
I recently found this story and I love it great job, easily worth a favorite and follow
I really wish he had punched blueblood. It would have made for so much drama... ( and I would have taken some guilty pleasure from it. )
Oh the cats in the cradle and the silver spoon, little Lunamoon loves the man in the room,
When you going to punch blueblood in the head?, John's gonna have a good time then.
I'm not sorry.
Eh, should have been Sunny. Greater chance of a 'normal' family life after all of this conflict you're putting them through here. Sunny also had far more cues to a potential romance than Luna did. Now, even if you cover romance after the conflicts, it's not going to be normal in any sense of the word, or even as attempt to make it normal. If that makes sense. Bit of a shame, but hey, your story.
oaf.
Also, phone, soaked clothing, soaked phone.
Unless it's been established it was waterproof.
8101840 Thanks for the spot
Also with regards to the phone:
It never got wet
My sides weren't ready for this mental image.
you gotta admit this song fits here rather well!
I was truly chuckling at the image of John’s story with the artillery! Almost makes me want to join the army
While I’m waayyy too late for the vote, I love its direction!
Darn I would have voted for Sunny if I'd been here.
The story theme thriller should be added, whenever things slow down, something serious happpens and picks up the pace
I personally think sunny was a better choice because it's less predictable and it's a nice change of pace to have background or new characters rather than main characters
You've got to be kidding me, 3 different stories written at 3 different tims with 3 different settings, and each time the main human hooks up with Luna... I'd be infuriated if I wasn't so annoyed. This isnt a criticism of the story, I'm just sick of the luna love, especially with oc's to choose from to make it more unpredictable
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Luna is too powerful, best pony
RIP, was really hoping for it to be Sunny because she's adorable, but Luna is OK too.