A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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Before I contunie to read this chapter I should like to note that I was thinking of this story earlier in the day while trying to think of what people type the sound of a gun. I also glanced over hos its been awhile since a chapter was posted... but hey. Authors deserve to have breaks right, because we don't need any union strikes now do we?
Anyways funnily enough I was also about to sign out since I thought I couldn't find anything for the rest of the night. Then at the home screen though I spotted two words pop in the featured box then stopped everything(including butt not excludded to about to fall asleep) just to read this new chapter.
Note stopped reading at the first bolded phat phat phat. In case anyone wonders for reason of wondering. Also phones stink for typing comments.
Hey, you know what they say. “If it’s stupid but it works, it ain’t stupid”
Of course there’s the counter quote. “If it’s stupid but it works, it’s still stupid, you’re just lucky”
nicely done now things just got more intresting qould be kinda nice to hear an litel how the othere grups is doing as an status report on what they have acomplish.
and that cat on the ruff top? posebly have somethnig with dis to do.
allso keep up the great work man
Hey it's Shadow! Nice to see her face back in the light! Hopefully now she and John can get some closure on what happened in the past and get to trust one another again like how they used to be! I mean it wasn't his fault and clearly now she can see that albeit with still a little reluctance. Hopefully they can become friends again. I know losing someone or somepony so close can be tragic but come on Shadow! Just let your pent up feelings out and get it out of your system! Holding it in and not letting go is going to tear you apart even more!
Now for this infiltration... Man I just foresee so much disaster happening here. With his previous track record I just feel he's walking into something way over his head.
This is so dame good! I can't stop Reading!
8831220 That would work, but I would need two 1 liters though. :-)
8783190 You're not a Klingon in real life are you, because they have the same belief that you do. To them being captured and possibly tortured for information would be considered dishonorable, and would not get them into Sto Vo Kor, which is basically the Klingon version of Heaven where the honorable Warriors go when they die. It's similar to Valhalla in Norse mythology. Off the top of my head I can't remember the name of the place where the dishonorable Klingons go when they die, but It's their version of Hell.
first welcome back BB.
this is a interesting chapter in all the good ways.
John seeking around as if you may as well just throw a spot light on him.
(Big Mac voice) eyup
This is so good!
Nice addition
Why not just transmogrify? If Luna's going to be visiting with the Minister, she could just turn him into a Ridge Cat.
The infiltration would certainly make for an interesting storyline, but I have to say that infiltrating a people you know little or nothing about, be it their culture, customs or mannerisms, just because you look vaguely like them, is straight up suicidal. Even if it was vital for them to get there, I don't really see how any CO would approve of that with an "entertained grin".
Why did all the Drama between John, Luna, and Spitfire get sweeped under the story's rug? Spitfire was having freakout nightmares and PTSD Trama to the point she freaked out when she saw John once. And John got so mad at Luna he pretty much broke up with her.
But now Spitfire is happy to hangout and talk with John just fine, still be in the military as well. And John is getting publically engaged with Luna and everyone acts like Luna didn't go all Nightmare Moon, break a lot of laws, and mentally attacked someone below her rank, and abused her power as a leader. Luna wasn't even punished, or Spitfire given help or compensation.
I mean seriously, I almost want to go back just to make sure the Author didn't take that entire storyline out of the story, and that it did indeed happen, cause it was never resolved, brought up beyond once, and isn't impacting the story like it should be.
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Time. They have 1 day to get set up and into position, and Luna is still a week out at the least.
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I agree, what happened with all that with spitfire Luna and John, like what, is no one talking about it anymore