A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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Poor AJ.
I hope you don't go the route of harem, because while that works for pure clopfics, I don't feel it works for these sort of stories, like that story A Wolf Among Ponies, the author had a chapter where it was a pivotal moment whether he decides whether to go harem or monogamy and he chose monogamy, and I feel the story benefited largely because of it... Ironically that was Luna as the main romance too.
Nice chapter and I see the "potential triangle" situation is from the table for now.
Hm. To be serious, I expected John to react like that. He's together with Luna, so obviously he would want to stay loyal to her and only her. Hopefully, Applejack doesn't do something completely stupid like taking the love potion out of the trash and clings in a last attempt to the "-Different. How?" bit to win him over. I don't expect her do to that, but who knows.
Now I feel bad for the farm pony. But she has my respect for being able to withstand the temptation of the love potion -for now- and that she went for the route, worthy of the Element she represents. She could have taken the easy route and instead chose to stay honest and risked being rejected. Thumps up.
8194773 Personally I have no issue with Harems. I know that If I wrote a story with romance I'd wind up going with the Harem route since I doubt I could choose just one. I don't think it really hurts anything unless the Romance is the main focus of the story.
Point's for choosing honest-route... Even if it is painful one... And that potion better stay in trash.
I wonder how rest of mane6 react to this?
Thats going to hit the harvest.
Feel a little bad for AJ but I'm glad it went this way as I'm not a personal fan of harems/herds too much, and I would have been very disappointed if he cheated on Luna as he was cheated on himself, so I'm glad he was honest and chose to be loyal. Not to say this won't result in a harem in the end, there is still room for it in the story and there are moments when it is obvious he finds AJ attractive, I just hope he remains monogamous.
Anachronon summed it up quite well in his comment. I hope the AJ-John drama gets resolved and they remain good friends, but don't get together.
We've got our work cut out for us
I do hate auto correct do not trust it.
I really feel for AJ as I have been in that place my self.
a vary good chapter.
Honesty hurts.
8198619 i really like strange and random trivia aout war like the drunken war,bucket war,battle of castle itter and stuff like that i whould be part of a military myself but i sadly got problems with my bones that and they dont like my political belives
Damn... Things are gonna be awkward from here on... Then again, AJ doesn't have any selfish qualities. Stubborn but unselfish.
Slight discomfort? Maybe.
If things don't work out with Luna and AJ is willing, then sure! 100% approval!
8201020 support for the ground troops, yes. But try being where I've been. I have been in countless shot outs in many countries. I have seen a lot of things in battles, but beginning in the air is quite fun. I remember my first drop from an C-130 and Roping down from a Blackhawk is quite fun as well.
8201070 I was talking about the BAR
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Well. Honestly I won't be upset if it goes either way. Monogamous or Polygamous. I like em both as long as they're done right.
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Even if the Romance is the main focus, there is no problem with Harems. The problem, is that no one can do a very good Harems story, or those that do are short clopfics and so don't see the long term story.
So it can be done, it just won't be the way most people picture or like. But do remember. Ponies are a Herd race, and the show pretty much support that as there is about a 10 to 1 ratio of girls to guys.
its funny becuase its true.
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The British army has its priorities right
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