A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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I guess abortion doesn't exist in equestria else they would have probably at least mentioned it, even if the idea got shot down straight away. Though I don't think it's been discussed before so I'd would have thought john would have brought it up. Doesn't really matter though.
Welcome.
To The Mill.
are we gonna see more Pony John cause of this debacle?
Sleep? What is that, some kinda food?
Keep up the good writing
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Yeah, that'd end well, I can already see the equestria news when they inevitably find out "Princess Luna Murders Own Child, Evidence Of Nightmare Moon?"
Ty for using the OC I gave you and I like where the Luna arc is going
Who ever came up with the name Von Wahrenhoof deserves a medal.
the next two weeks are going to be hell.
John was broadsided with the new of Luna being pregnant but he handled it pretty good.
Luna is going to taking so much heat over her anointing that John and her are a thing.
a vary good chapter.
i can't say i'm not exsited to se what happens next! but this gonna be fun to read can hardly waite for the next chapter all ready! XD
and if you would like more info on something you can just tell me and i will make sure you get it! and keep strong!
Calling it now, Gaea Shield is definitely a changeling, and I suspect Harts Fire may be too.
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I think it might be some type of soup
Alright, now let the
hunger gamestraining begin. I'm interested how you're gonna deal with the OC's, because that is a lot of OC's to focus on, and from what I can see you seems to be telling too much detail for them to be special cannon fodder so I'm interested what you're gonna do with them.Also I'm watching my own OC like a parent, don't dissapoint me now you small equine. Also lot of Pegasi, make sense because pegasus seems to be the best pony species to be in a combat role, though I'm suprise there is no gryphon in the team.
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Yeah, honestly, while I love this story to bits, I'm tired of the whole "character gets pregnant and it has to have the baby yes or yes". It's just like the whole CMCs-running-into-the-Everfree-only-to-get-rescued-by-the-main-character thing; simply overused. While I understand that it will make the story more dramatic, I also think that in a magical land where two inmortal ponies raise and lower the sun and moon, abortion would be a feasible option, since apparently in this story they also have condoms. Oh well, let's just keep reading and see how this ends.
This LL be fun here and I'm glad he took the reveal pretty well all things considered.
So good for the two of ‘em!