A British Army Royal Engineer is met with a peculiar phenomenon whilst on tour. Unknown to him, he will find himself stranded in a strange new world which seems to be shifting around him. Will he be able to adapt to this new world?
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Man, your a story writing machine!
Loving this story, can't wait for the next bit.
What was I saying about Spectre...
Oh no. *Sniffles* Spectre! John! Shadow! No...
*Blows nose with a handkerchief* I blame Celestia, if she had told John of Tirek earlier, it would've been unlikely this would've happened. A bullet to the head of a weak Centaur would've ended it all.
Celestia should stay out of military affairs, Luna is much more competent with this sort of stuff. Princess Celestia is better suited for handling diplomacies, treasury and general governing that the rest of the princesses can do.
I'm glad that she at least acknowledged her fault though, so she wins back some points from me.
Ohhhh shit, Williams is back.
Already the next chapter. You are a beast!
I must say I alreay expected that Spectre might die and can understand that Shadow is furious. He killed her sister, not something easily to forgive, control or not.
On a positive note I can respect that Celestia (who fucked up) finally acknowledges that she made huge mistakes and endangered others with her decisions (It would be kind of awesome when after all this Luna will be like: "No more lacks in security!" And starts to pull more of her own influence against her sister as a supposed to be co-ruler) and tries to make first amends with helping Luna saving him. How that plays out remains to be seen. He'll most likely hate himself when he gets confirmed that he's responsible for the death of one of his own soldiers/friends.
And it will be interesting to see how others will react, will they see that John was under control beyond his abilities to defend himself at all or wil they see him as a coldblooded monster like Spectre? And what role will William play for John?
*barely contains excitement*
It's that time of the year everybody! It's depression season! Get ready for Drama! Sadness! Anxiety! Betrayal! And most importantly Depression! Fuck, I remember when this was about John being an absolute badass. Don't take my comment the wrong way, I love the story, I love Drama, and every story need a drama and a sad part or else it get kinda bland, but everytime I read those it just make me feel shitty as hell and it make my heart break into tears, guess it's time to brace myself for a shitty(in a good way) weekend.
So easy to turn a living frog, into a living frog orange, yet so difficult to help assist the body turn damaged parts into undamaged parts. Because after 2 million years of combat evolution, its far too easy a result, instead of being a worthwhile reward for all that effort?
K now I'm caught up with the story
How often do you update?
8115236 It all depends on work since I work shift rotations so I can't say for certain that a chapter will be released on a set day.
I try to get at least one chapter released a week, if I'm not overloaded with work you can expect potentially two or three
This story is too good
Holy Shit man this is your best work yet Dude. It's exciting to see how you tie parts together. Cant wait to see how you tie Williams to John.... Get the next chapter done ASAP.
8121382 If you want some help then drop me a message.
If I can then I'll try to help where I can
8112967 in ww1 they used a cloth and urine for protection against phosgene gas doesn't work for chlorine
8128258 tht song is incredibly overrated its nothing but a generic pile of (insert curse word here)
812198 it works but isnt very effective
Oh come on! That's not fair! Realistic for a universe with the capacity for corrupting mind magic. But surely you could of let her live!
I'm definitely one of those people who prefer a happy ending.
I'm just sad. Why couldn't this be a happy ending!?
images2.imgbox.com/3c/56/FOh3jzF3_o.gif This is literally what I did after reading the part where there was nothing to be done for Spec.
(I'm definitely loving this story, don't get me wrong. I will just have to hope the next negative reality check/plot twist/etc. isn't soon)
Hmm could of said “no longer with us” isn’t this just being blunt just saying that “she’s dead”