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Wandering Pigeon
I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...
Wandering Pigeon
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Can't wait to see how Quiblle'll react to this new Daring Do story.
This was a nice start, Pigeon, I can't wait to see how this story'll continue.
7532890 Assuming Daring retains enough intellgience by the end of it all to write a book about it.
7532909 Rainbow Dash could write it for her, maybe the title could be "Daring Do: My Adventure As a Mentally Regressed Foal!"
7532918 Assuming Rainbow Dash doesn't fall victim to the curse as well.
7532919 True, but maybe she could write down what happens to her and Daring Do as their adventures continue?
7532927 Time will tell.
what? no mummy ? ....But I doo like the pacifier
By George, it's competently written. I'll keep an eye on this and might check out your other stuff if you've managed to remain consistent. Color me interested.
You've got the makings of a fun story here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Yup, I'm really enjoying this. I like the steady decline into foalishness and how the narration follows the same pattern. Such as the decreased vocabulary the further it goes. Looking forward to the next chapter and to see what rainbow's reaction is.
This is pretty cute so far. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Linking to unpublished chapters is against fimfiction's rules, but we can't access them because of the password anyways.
Daring Do ain't dealing with this curse no more!
This was a nice story, Pigeon, I enjoyed it. It was fun to see Rainbow and Daring acting like regressed foals, and it worked very well. Good job on this one, can't wait for more
7540893 Whoops, sorry
I've adjusted the links now so they should go to a Googledocs sheet now.
7540975 Glad you enjoyed it! Here's hoping I can get more fics out soon.
7541182 You're welcome!
And I can't wait to read your future works!
7541182 Hey, hate to be that guy, but... found this in the rules page.
Why don't you just publish those two chapters here, and link to each chapter instead of google docs?
7541202 That's a fair enough idea. The reason I didn't publish them in the first place was simply because I wanted to keep the choose-your-own ending part a secret, but sticking to the site rules is more important. Thanks for the help.
7541213 I understand completely. Also, I wouldn't say which chapter is the good end or bad end in the title. As soon as I clicked on the link I wanted, I was immediately told by the chapter title how the story would end.
7541220 Yeah, you're right. That's a much better idea.
Ooh, let's see how far this curse goes in terms of regressing her.
After all, what would Quibble Pants think if he read it?
Chapters are linked backwards.
7542217 Should be fixed now. Thanks
Such a fun story! Loved it a lot.
It does leave me with a couple of questions though, things that I would have kinda liked to see cleared up. Like...with the "bad end," what happens to them from there? Part of me kinda expected some mystical caretaker to show up for Daring or something. Also, with only one pacifier, how would both of them stay cursed? I guess they could just take the paci from each other and refresh their curse, but is that it? And who changes them?
Regardless of getting answers for those, the story was great, and thank you for it!
7543323 Well, the plan was to leave the "bad end" rather open to interpretation. That being said, I'd always just pictured them constantly snapping out of their curse, taking care of the other for a little while, and then end up refreshing their own curse over and over again, but you can come up with your own ending if you prefer.
Glad you enjoyed the story
I LOVE THIS! YOU IS AWESOME!
7575798 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
7575854 Enjoyed is an understatement you and Padded Fox are officially #1!
Quite thr amusing tale indeed. Although I wonder how the bad ending would go after of many diaper changes. You know limited pile and food
The One Pacifier......TO RULE THEM ALL!!
7544087
it sounds like it would be possible for both endings to happen. Ending 2 happening first and then ending 1 at a later point.
That said have you thought about doing a continuation from this ending? I have a couple of ideas for how it could continue if you want to hear them.
8173882 Sorry, but I haven't really been all that interested in doing a follow up to this fic. It already has two separate endings, even if they could technically follow a linear timeline, and that's all I really think it needs.
But if you do have ideas you want to see come to life based on this concept, then I really encourage you to write your own fic based around it. I would love to see what you can come up with.
8174245
thanks for the response and encouragement but ehhh... I have far too many story ideas on my plate right now to toss on a few more. besides with my limited time it may be years before I could get to it.
8174715 I understand. Best of luck with the ideas you've got lined up!
Very well written. I particularly liked the pair of ending possibilities. Each one made a lot of sense for the situation. The amount of detail on how the curse effected its target was impressive. Easily imaginable.
I most definitely could see how this adventure would end up never making it to print. Though I am certain Daring wouldn't mind recalling the directions and feeding them to Ahuizotel. Perhaps that would allow her to write about this adventure... with some careful edits of course. :)
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A weird Fanfiction. He never would have thought ponies liked this kind of thing.
Soup? I think its a can with a spoon in it. Lol
This is why we can't have nice things in the first place. And four is a number.
quite an interesting start to this story
well
quite an enjoyable story, with 2 endings