Cherry on Top

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TheVClaw

TheVClaw #1 · Jun 7th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Well.. That's one way to pop someone's cherry. 😜

Wandering Pigeon

Wandering Pigeon #2 · Jun 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Nice

Aerin Silverfeather

Aerin Silverfeather #3 · Jun 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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You dork 👌

Yosh-E-O

Yosh-E-O #4 · Jun 7th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Definitely a 'guilty pleasure' story. However it is written extremely well with a great pace that makes it more than just a run-of-the-mill 'clop fic'.

You definitely have a good talent for putting together tales that allow the mind to visualize all that goes on while also not making any particular moment too long nor too short.

Very nicely done.

Wandering Pigeon

Wandering Pigeon #5 · Jun 7th, 2019 · · ·

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Glad you could get some enjoyment out of this, one way or the other.

JordanOlson

JordanOlson #6 · Jun 8th, 2019 · · ·

I actually really enjoyed “Rainbow Dash’s ‘Mommy’” as well so it came as quite the surprise to read this and get a similar vibe even before reading the authors note.
Excellent work on this story!