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Wandering Pigeon

I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...

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Nice start but there were quite a few spelling mistakes in it. I'll go through later and point them out for you!

Thanks! I really appreciate all the help I can get in that department :twilightsheepish:

Your work is a treat as usual. Can't wait for more!

Awww cant wait to see what happens next!

Your work is always top notch, and I expect this to be no different. I look forward to whatever comes next. :pinkiesmile:


To her sides, two massive subwoofers boomed her ear candy out to the entire club. Being right next to them would usually be cause for concern, seeing as how Vinyl typically liked to crank up the base to deafening levels, but she was smarter than that.

Should be bass.

She could still hear her music, she needed to after all, but the worse effects were dampened. That was probably for the best, all things considered. Vinyl didn’t want to go deaf so earlier in her career.

Should be early

That sent Pacific’s eyelids fluttering in confusion. “Uh… I not sure about that. I’ve had a lot of DJ’s quit on the first night because they didn’t know about--”

I think you meant I'm here.

me wuvs oct and vinyl and i wonder how vinyl will find place or what will happen next

Hook Successful!! Eagerly awaiting to see how this is gonna unfold!

All fixed up. Thanks for the help.

Thanks guys! Glad I can still make stuff you enjoy. I always worry about getting rusty after these long breaks from writing.

I think you all will like what's to come. No spoilers though. :raritywink:

Decent, but rough, as Thunder mentioned. Still a cut above the rest in the niche.

Also, it's with noting the pacifiers are more so people don't grind their teeth to a pulp while hopped up on some chemical concoction, not a 'fashion statement' (although for Pacific, it most likely is, all things considered).

Looking forward to some more.

Thanks! I'm definitely going to see if I can sharpen this up some more in the next chapter. This one ended up the way it is since it needed to function as an introduction, and didn't flow neatly into the rest of the fic without having a chapter break. Without that problem moving forward, chapter 2 should end up being much better.

I shall remain cautiously optimistic, then.

Oh my God, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I am intrigued... can't wait to see where this is going! :twilightsmile:

Oh my gosh, this club sounds so adorable. Vinyl seems like she's really struggling, here's hoping her night starts perking up!

Glad you liked all the little ideas I came up with for it. I'm sure Vinyl will learn to appreciate them too. :raritywink:

Another nice setup chapter! You managed to capture the reality Pacific has had to deal with, not to mention her Shy Nature towards her whole thing. Can't wait for next chapter, but when might that be?

It'll be in 2018. I really can't get anymore specific than that, unfortunately.:twilightsheepish:

Oh well, as long as it comes out. I gotta get used to waiting for release dates, reading Berserk and all.

Definitely have my interest. Simply isn't enough Padded Vinyl fics if you ask me!

There definitely isn't. Hopefully the next few chapters can help scratch that itch at least.

hopefully vinyl does not leak. Putting on your own diapers is hard at first. LOL Hopefully also their will be some messing not just wetting.

Oh, I think Vinyl's diaper is thick enough to handle anything she can throw at it without leaking. Probably. Maybe.

I can't wait for the next chapter! You left me on a horrid cliff hanger!!!

Vinyl didn't bother to ask where the bathrooms are, assuming this club has any bathrooms given what the patrons wear. :raritywink:

Some typos:
It was *earlier enough that no bouncers were out. Heck, not *even velvet ropes had *even been set up yet.

she* her back was grateful she didn’t have to carry spine-crushingly

I must admit that my suspension of disbelief is stretched by Pacific's lack of foresight. Considering they've had issues with DJs being reluctant to play with a diaper, and then deciding that the DJs have to wear something, why don't they just have some thin pullups, or even a plain onesie with some extra cloth for the rear to make it look like a diaper?

I mean, I get it, those would interfere with your setup, but their absence still feels notable to me.

Anyways, decent chapter, looking forward to the next one. Hope you have a good new years :)

Had to be done, I'm afraid. But don't worry, I hope to have more up soon.

She's just too afraid to ask, given what the likely answer will be. :raritywink:

Thanks for catching those typos. On Pacific's lack of foresight, that is definitely something I should've addressed in-chapter. If I were to go back and re-edit this sometime, I'd likely include a bit about how Pacific considered solutions such as those, but ultimately decided against them because they felt too much like lying to her patrons or cheapening the experience of her club and that she'd prefer to find a DJ willing to wear diapers rather than do that.

Anyways, I'm glad the story's still holding your interest. Hope you also have a happy new years!

This is so cute I wish there was a club like this near me.
also thanks for putting me on your list of top ten best padded-pony fic's that really made my day.

Thanks, I had a lot of fun coming up with all the details of the club floor.

And you're welcome! I had a great time reading your story and would love to see more from you in the future.

Im LOVING THIS right now! Hoping Vinyl doesnt have any trouble finding the potty after all that booze jk Im totally crossing my fingers on her soaking herself XD, btw this is UBER ADORABLE. Cant wait to see more of little Scratchy's padded adventures lol XD

One question tho? Will this story just involve wetting, or will everypony be doing the other thing in their diapers? Just curious of what to expect, i personally prefer authors to go all out. XD but i know some are disgusted by the act and choose to leave that stuff out...

It's great to hear you're enjoying it! As for how far the diaper usage is going to go, I don't really want to give that away; it's just a bit of a spoiler is all. :raritywink:

okay, i guess ill just have to be suprised lol

2 things: 1; This is adorable. Hands down amazing. 2: YOU RELEASED THE CHAPTER ON MY BIRTHDAY!?!:pinkiehappy:

1. Good, I was aiming for adorableness.

2. I did?! AWESOME!

This is a very interesting story premise with Vinal becoming a DJ to this place and have a proper motive to stick with it both financial and pride, makes for a that she is willing to stick with it for a while, at least until she can find better for herself. Can't wait to see how she will fall into those trappings of ABDL and what she will discover that the attendees will be doing there.

The hardest part writing so far was making a convincing reason for Vinyl to stick around once she learned what the club was, so it's great to see it worked!

So is Octavia just Vinyl's roommate or marefriends? Would be funny to see her make a close friend with ABDL stallion. I hope she will start wearing a bonnet.

She and Octavia are just roommates in this. As for the other stuff, I won't give out any spoilers; you'll just have to read and see.

this story is really amazing, I love it, and i think it's your cutest story yet.

It's about to get cuter, so watch out.

But seriously, thanks :twilightsmile:

Okay, this would be a place Mindset would be interested in, Granted, Mindset's not ABDL, but she wears diapers 24/7, (though not by choice,) but just having a place where she can feel comfortable being in them would be a cool place for her.

Berry probably needs to be double diapered with how much she drinks. I get the feeling Vinyl's gonna be just as soaked by the end of the night at the rate she's currently drinking. :raritywink:

I think you did a good job at easing Vinyl into ABDL theme and realistically show the reaction that you would expect from someone that isn't into that stuff in the first place and find good arguments in trying putting up with it for some more. I like the the bottled beer part as a way to show that she has to overcome her own preconceptions on the ABDL in her mind and having her admit that it isn't so bad. Good job on that.

Oh she just might. :raritywink:

Thanks! Hopefully you'll like the rest of Vinyl's foray into the ABDL world, too.

I must say, the cover art is very well-made. Do you know who made it?

I really have wondered why they never came up with some kind of "adult" "manly" version of nipples for beer and alcohol. The closest I have seen to this idea was from an episode of the Drew Carey show. Also I wonder what kind of diaper the security ponies wear? I have done some security jobs where I was at a door and ID'ed people. I legit wish diapers were a common thing with security.

Loving the direction this is taking! Poofed up Vinyl is among my favorite diapered pones.

Fillyscoots42 made it a while back. I completely spaced on sourcing the image earlier, but it has a working link now that'll take you to the full thing.

The bouncer's for this club wear medium sized diapers, like Berry. I kinda wanted to have a scene with them early on to show they do their jobs from the comfort of a baby bouncer too (mostly cause I thought bouncers in bouncers would be funny) but never did.

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