Nice start but there were quite a few spelling mistakes in it. I'll go through later and point them out for you!

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Thanks! I really appreciate all the help I can get in that department

Your work is a treat as usual. Can't wait for more!

Awww cant wait to see what happens next!

Your work is always top notch, and I expect this to be no different. I look forward to whatever comes next.

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To her sides, two massive subwoofers boomed her ear candy out to the entire club. Being right next to them would usually be cause for concern, seeing as how Vinyl typically liked to crank up the base to deafening levels, but she was smarter than that.

Should be bass.

She could still hear her music, she needed to after all, but the worse effects were dampened. That was probably for the best, all things considered. Vinyl didn’t want to go deaf so earlier in her career.

Should be early

That sent Pacific’s eyelids fluttering in confusion. “Uh… I not sure about that. I’ve had a lot of DJ’s quit on the first night because they didn’t know about--”

I think you meant I'm here.

me wuvs oct and vinyl and i wonder how vinyl will find place or what will happen next

Hook Successful!! Eagerly awaiting to see how this is gonna unfold!

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All fixed up. Thanks for the help.

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Thanks guys! Glad I can still make stuff you enjoy. I always worry about getting rusty after these long breaks from writing.

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I think you all will like what's to come. No spoilers though.

Aaaaand faved

Decent, but rough, as Thunder mentioned. Still a cut above the rest in the niche.

Also, it's with noting the pacifiers are more so people don't grind their teeth to a pulp while hopped up on some chemical concoction, not a 'fashion statement' (although for Pacific, it most likely is, all things considered).

Looking forward to some more.

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Thanks! I'm definitely going to see if I can sharpen this up some more in the next chapter. This one ended up the way it is since it needed to function as an introduction, and didn't flow neatly into the rest of the fic without having a chapter break. Without that problem moving forward, chapter 2 should end up being much better.

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I shall remain cautiously optimistic, then.

Oh my God, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I am intrigued... can't wait to see where this is going!

good start to the story