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Wandering Pigeon

I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...

Wandering Pigeon Joined 24th Sep, 2014 · Offline

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The Abyss
The Abyss #1 · Jun 24th, 2016 · · ·
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Solid chapter, but I was disappointed to see that it was just one chapter.

SuperPinkBrony12
SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Jun 24th, 2016 · · ·
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7334280 I so agree. I wanna see a sequel where Fleetfoot and Surprise baby her some more, maybe even have Soarin stop by for a visit. :rainbowkiss:

Arzoo
Arzoo #4 · Jun 24th, 2016 · · ·
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Nicely executed, though straightforward and very cookie-cutter diaper fic.

LilGuppy
LilGuppy #5 · Jun 25th, 2016 · · ·
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Love it! Totally wanna see more! :rainbowdetermined2:

Nightsoul
Nightsoul #6 · Jun 25th, 2016 · · ·
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I now want to see the next day with Spitfire in Surprises care... it sounds so cute! Also the idea of Twilight turning Trixie and/or Starlight Glimmer into foals to take care of them for a wile as a mock punishment.

river710
river710 #7 · Jun 25th, 2016 · · ·
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Much better than I expected, was never a huge fan of the wonderbolts as characters, but you really made them come to life I think.

Great job, would love a chapter two!

Caper
Caper #8 · Jun 29th, 2016 · · ·
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perfect ending. Now those are are some pretty understanding friends.

Mix-up
Mix-up #10 · Jul 13th, 2016 · · ·
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This was a great story, I would love to see more from you.

NeoLuna
NeoLuna #11 · Nov 1st, 2017 · · ·
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7347157
darn strait, I'm not an abdl fully, but time to time a minor amount of relaxation like this is what you need, even more so with understanding friends:twilightsmile:

qwery
qwery #12 · Aug 13th, 2018 · · ·
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Spitty :rainbowlaugh:
Cute as well

Wild Stallion
Wild Stallion #13 · Jan 23rd, 2023 · · ·
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...But she could stick around for a little while.

You naughty girl!:twilightblush:

As the door shut behind her, Spitfire was already halfway through getting her uniform off.

That's it girl! Take it off! Take it all off! :derpytongue2:

As she peeled the sweaty spandex from her coat, the smell really hit her.

Is someone a sweaty girl?:pinkiegasp: Good thing I'm into that.:pinkiecrazy:

“Oof,” Spitfire grunted. She dropped the uniform on the floor and kicked it away. “Gonna have to wash that.”

Yeah you will.:rainbowdetermined2:

A package of diapers, a pacifier, some folded up foalish clothes, and a few toys were all packed inside; the brunt of Spitfire’s supplies she kept at work.

MMM! This is getting good!:raritystarry:

For as long as Spitfire could remember, she'd been really attracted to the idea of wearing diapers. They were just... so comfortable; it was like wearing a security blanket. They made her happy. Embarrassed, but happy.

Daww! You're just a silly cutie aren't you sweetie? :heart:

“Really! Captain, you like to play with foal toys? Can you show me?” Surprise’s eyes widened as she took a begging stance that made her look more dog than pony.

“Yeah, show us!” Fleetfoot encouraged from behind her.

Yes please!:pinkiehappy:

“I dunno, Surprise, we’d probably need a stroller for her if we go anywhere,” Fleetfoot grinned, earning a dirty look from Spitfire.

I don't know why. Sounds like a excellent idea to me.:raritywink:

Surprise inhaled sharply. “Oh, you’re right! Spitty, do you have a stroller we could put you in?”

Please say yes!:rainbowderp:

Spitfire’s face darted back to a blush in an instant, from both the suggestion and the cutesy nickname she’d just been stuck with. “N-No…”

Aww!:applecry:

“This’ll probably help.” Fleetfoot revealed a white bib with a pink trim and the words ‘Lil’ Sissy’ written on them with a girly font.

So Cute! I wonder what other incriminating outfits she has in her desk?:rainbowkiss:

“Y-You know I’m not actually a foal, right?” she asked.

“What?” Surprise giggled. “What a silly question. Of course I do, Spitty.” She patted her commanding officer’s back with a motherly touch. “But I can tell you like acting like one.”

Yeah she does.:ajsmug:

Though reluctant, Spitfire’s thirst overcame her discomfort, and she suckled away. The milk from the bottle was just as good as the last, so she happily drank it down.

Aww! The filly like her milky!:trollestia:

“Aww…” Fleetfoot stroked Spitfire’s mane. “You really are pretty adorable… Spitty.”

When the mare's right she's right.:eeyup:

Though, she had to admit that it wasn’t half bad. She’d never really been tickled before, but she couldn’t deny that it wasn’t fun. At least a little bit.

Seems like someone likes tickles.:coolphoto:

Usually it was relieving, if not fun experience for her.

I think this scene is missing an "a" somewhere.

Her ‘bathroom break’ finally coming to a close, Spitfire couldn’t help but feel the embarrassment overflow. She sniffled.

It's okay sweetie. You couldn't help being a little tinkle pants.:pinkiesad2:

Spitfire just suckled her pacifier, trying to hold back tears. On top of everything else, she definitely didn’t want these two seeing her cry.

Aww! The poor filly!:fluttershyouch: Don't cry Sweetie!:fluttershysad:

“...I… I wike using my diapee,” Spitfire admitted. It wasn’t like there was much left for her to lose after all.

Aww! Was that so hard Sweetie?:twilightsmile:

Spitfire’s ears flicked, not sure if she heard correctly. Surprise wanted to baby her again, for a whole day? “Really?”

You know you want it Spitty.:scootangel:

Surprise grabbed the pacifier and slid it back in Spitfire’s mouth. “Really really, Spitty.”

Cute but it doesn't fit with the narrative. She swallows in the next scene and then we don't see her slurring her words for the rest of the story, so unless she ate it...:applejackconfused:

“Hey… maybe I could come too?” Fleetfoot asked, earning two pairs of eyes in her direction. “Look, I promise not to tease you or anything, okay? I just don’t really get why you like diapers is all. Maybe I could figure out why tomorrow?”

Ooh! Are you suggesting something Fleetfoot?:duck:

“Heh… yeah, sure.” Fleetfoot smiled nervously.

Why so nervous Fleetie?:trixieshiftright:

Spitfire nodded. “Yeah… and… you know you can call me Spitty.”

They all smiled.

Aww! I love a happy ending!:yay:

Incidentally, if the success of a fic is proportional to wanting to see it continue, and or take its subject home, then this is definitely a winner.

I award you full points and Spitfire (and her future sister Fleetfoot) lots of leg bouncies, kisses, nuzzles and cuddles.:moustache:

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