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Wandering Pigeon


I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...

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Love where it's going so far!

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That's good to hear! Sadly, I don't think Twilight is as excited. :twilightoops:

why do I have feeling the ai will infect and control the whole castle and diaper rest of twilight friends, spike, starlight, the CMC, then the other princess till it expance to all the planet

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Probably cause Twilight is known to mess up pretty badly from time to time. :twilightsheepish:

Well this is interesting always love those automated nursery, I hope this is going to be a lot of fun for her and for anypony who gets lured by this. Keep it up.

EEE!!! I love Nannybots/Machine babying things!

LOVE IT!!! ^_^

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Oh, it's going to be fun alright.:pinkiehappy:

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Ah, I see you're a pony of taste.:moustache:

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true, be funny to have it do it to discord make him powerfuless

I'm sorry, Twilight, but i'm afraid I can't let you do that.

Very interesting. You leave us teased on what the other doors may contain along with the prospect of how the AI may have learned a bit more than Twilight ever would've expected.

For me, I see this as a classic Twilight mistake. She gets so excited about her ideas that she can often neglect a detail in which could result in a massive 'whoops!'. (Kind of like almost everything she did with Cozy Glow in Season 8 up until the end)

Nice job with letting us know how Twilight's sleepy stupor resulted in her not closing the secret passage. You did it so early in the chapter. All the other aspects of the tale from that point can make it easy for us, the readers, to forget the mistake as much as Twilight forgetting to cover her tracks.

You also did well to provide a degree of understanding why Twilight may have such a get away in her castle. Providing a justification always makes stories like this more enjoyable as it isn't just 'she digs diapers and being babied'. Having something to work with provides depth to the tale.

Nice job!

While I love machines turning on their creators, god damn it if I don't really like AB themes

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It's good to see you've found a lot to chew on with just the first chapter. :twilightsmile: There certainly was a lot of set up going on in this chapter, but with that out of the way the next chapter is free to really pick up going forward.

Loving it so far! :rainbowkiss: :pinkiehappy: :heart: Although, I still wanted Twilight to reach her objective of sleeping in her crib with her poopy diaper. :raritydespair: Well, maybe she will have another opportunity, IDK. :rainbowlaugh:

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She probably will. And it probably won't be her choice then either:raritywink:

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And it probably won't be her choice then either :raritywink:

:rainbowhuh:

I hope Trixie get join the fun soon. and maybe it be good chance for twilight and Trixie become better friend?

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Trixie will get her turn. And she and Twilight will get pretty close from the experience... in a way.

Liked the first chapter! Excited for more!

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That's great to hear, cause more is coming... eventually:twilightsheepish:

I'm down with this. I just wish the diapers weren't changed.

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There'll be plenty more diapers in the future to soil, trust me :raritywink:

I don't know what to say aside from the fact that you somehow managed to top three of a kind with one chapter. God Damn.:pinkiehappy:

Twilight dabbed

So far so good!

I like the set up! It's interesting and you've got my attention, looking forward to more :D

Still a lot of fun to read so far keep it up

join us next time as starlight fail to save the princess and get diapered as well, join twilight diaperhood. follow by a dragon, rest of the friends the other princess save pinkie pie who is one control everything,

I really like how this chapter illustrates how those are AF / DL do have their limits to wanting to be in such a state. Twilight's struggles certainly make her have to deeply consider how much she'd genuinely like to be a foal. Being in control of when you're treated small is one thing. Having no control is another.
All the attempt escapes were very enjoyable. You could visualize each one along with the sheer desperation and frustration from each failure. There's also that element of how, in some extremely frustrating situations, one can feel aroused and Twilight is definitely dealing with that.

Oooh! Starlight is on her way to save twilight... or is she...?

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Thanks, I definitely plan to.

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Gosh, wouldn't that just be horrible :raritywink:

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The worst part for Twilight is, she's definitely not out of the woods yet, even if Starlight manages to save her. :trollestia:

Starlight continues to not be so Star-bright. Then again, why Twilight only installed a physical safety switch when a safety word would have been far more practical doesn't speak to her incredible intellect either (or activating said switch with her magic). Ah, but then we wouldn't have this scenario. Let's just chalk it up to her being too self-assured.

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Poor Twilight, the smartest options are never the most obvious when your libido takes control.:twilightsheepish: Starlight may fair better, but she doesn't even know what she's walking into:twilightoops:

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Ah well, misery loves company. Let's see just how much company she accrues before true rescue arrives ;)

Didn’t the nursery say it would give her a bath?

So one door is the bathroom and I guess the other door is a bedroom for more adult activities.

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Plans changed after Twilight acted out. Have to put those fussy fillies down for a nap when they start being naughty. :twilightsmile:

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:raritywink:

Hey i really love the way you've executed the story so far, keep up the good work can wait for more.

*grabs popcorn*
This is gonna be so entertaining....well not for Twilight that is!

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Thanks so much! Hope you like what's to come.

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Twilight might get some enjoyment out of it... if you know what I mean

Ah an machine nursery story that is written well. Poor truly bottom

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Well let’s just be glad it hadn’t put an Elena up her butt to clean her out yet. I can sense a pacifier gag once the furue. A soap pacifer for back talking bleh Sorry rambled

So, how do we speed this along.. i need more chapters in my life.. and my own robo nursery

seriously do you need like.. energy drinks.. i need like.. one chapter an hour.. asap XD (jk take your time, art cant be rushed)

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Trust me, if I could pump out chapters that fast I would. But if nothing else chapter 3 is shaping up to be pretty great so I hope it'll be worth the wait.

Why do I get the feeling that Starlight is going to end up wetting herself?

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Because I'm a cruel, cruel person, that's why :rainbowwild:

Solid chapter. Poor Glim though, she's going to end up in a used diaper before long.

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Thank you! And Glim should definitely watch out. A used diaper isn't the worst thing that can happen to her in this nursery.

You would figure that Starlight Glimmer would know that the red button always shuts off everything.....

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