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Wandering Pigeon


I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...

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The day of Nightmare Night, Derpy is stuck working deliveries. Having waited till the last minute, she doesn't have a costume for trick-or-treating yet. With that in mind she hurries up to finish with her last package.

In hindsight, she really should've skipped it.








Warning: contains diapers, diaper usage, ABDL content, spoopiness.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

Well, I saw that recent forum post where BlankFlankedFoal said there's not enough fics like these featuring background ponies. This is some pretty good timing.

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Pretty good timing indeed :twilightsmile: They set me up for this pretty well.

Very cute with just the right amount of spooky. The story had a great lead-up with one expecting the store to genuinely be purposely out of common sight to accommodate for the AFDLs. However the fact it was a haunted shop by a ghost pony certainly gives it a lot more umph.

The reveal of Tender certainly was proper, too. Lots of getting familiar with the ever-frightening situation happening until the true entity made her appearance. I wonder if she's one who shows up once each Nightmare Night to forever be bound to be a mom whose unfinished business is being a caretaker?

She definitely can come back later. Perhaps as part of a mystery in discovering why she exists, how she came to remain Equestriabound post death, and how she can move on.

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Glad to hear you enjoyed it. I actually wouldn't mind revisiting Tender Love next Nightmare Night to explore this concept some more, so who knows that mystery may just get a few answers.:raritywink:

Quite interesting to see Derpy of all ponies in a diaper fic, a really cute one at that. :rainbowkiss:

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Cute but spoopy :pinkiegasp:

Derpy really needs more ABDL love if you ask me.

Comment posted by paddedfox deleted Oct 28th, 2018

Great work on this one, looking forward to what you have planned for Halloween itself! :twilightsheepish:

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I'm looking forward to posting it too. It's easily more spoopy than this fic. :pinkiecrazy:

OOO HAHA

This was pretty cute! Really hoping to see more adorable Derp pone in padding in the future. Hopefully in some of your more naughty stuff too~

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I'm sure Derpy will make it into some naughty stuff eventually. I won't be able to resist.:derpytongue2:

Did you go out of your way to write this just because of my post? I feel honored! :rainbowkiss:

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This was one I’d had written a while ago actually, but I only just now published it in part after seeing your forum post. :twilightsmile:

Nice story looked a lot better then I expected, it flowed very well, can't wait to see what that other story will be like.

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Glad you liked it:twilightsmile:

The next one's going to be in a similar vein to this one, but not nearly as light hearted.

I found this just unbelievably adorable. Makes me sad that the spooky time of year is already gone. And speaking of adorable I love the pigeon persona you have. What inspired you to be a pigeon? Other than all the free bread crumbs of course.

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I wouldn't say much inspired me to be a pigeon or anything. I've just always had a soft spot for 'em is all. Glad you liked the story!

Derpy refused to dress up as a paper bag monster for the second year in a row.

I don't know why not. She looked good as a bag monster.:raritywink:

The entire place was pink. Like, sickeningly pink. The walls were bathed in the color, save a little white lace trim that decorated the edges. The wooden floor was mostly covered by a fuzzy pink rug that spanned underneath the aisles which were…

I love the decor.:rainbowdetermined2:

Lifting the cardboard flaps back, Derpy saw the contents. It was… large… and white… and plastic?

Packages of diapers, each bearing the label ‘adult’, lined one row of shelves. They ranged in style, color, and design too, each aiming to be as filly-ish as possible. Some were pink, some were frilly, some had hearts and sparkle designs on them, some were all three.

Wait, so why does she need a plain diaper when she has all of these cute ones?:rainbowhuh:

Was it specifically a ruse to lure in a helpless mail pony? How did she know she would get someone as cute as Muffy? And how does a ghost place such a order anyways?:rainbowderp:

Derpy gritted her teeth and strangled the door knob hoping to break the lock.

I love this image. It's just perfect, and oh so relatable.:moustache:

Of course that's the desperation of having locked yourself out of a room.:twilightsheepish:

That being said, I still relate to the desperation of trying to break down a door.:twilightoops:

Suddenly, her hoof stepped onto cardboard and slid. The surprise of accidentally stepping in the box cause Derpy to whirl around and slip. Luckily, her bottom landed on something soft and cushy, and not the hard floor.

Wait… soft and cushy?

Derpy frowned. “Are you kidding me?"

It's great how she just falls into it.:trollestia:

Shenanigans or not, it's just too perfect of a image.:rainbowlaugh:

Standing, Derpy tried shaking the diaper off. It didn’t matter how much her butt wiggled either, the diaper stayed put.

“D’aww, aren’t you just a cutie-patootie.”

Muffins is just the cutest little bubble butt.:rainbowkiss:

The voice didn’t respond. Instead, Derpy caught something out of the corner of her eye. On one of the shelves next to her, a pacifier was floating up and towards her.

Uh oh! Floating accessories!:pinkiegasp:

Run Muffy run!:flutterrage:

For all the good it will do you.:applecry:

“Mrrph!” Derpy exclaimed. She didn’t want to suckle it at all! What was happening?

Cuteness. Cuteness is happening.:pinkiesmile:

The front door she knew wouldn’t work at this point. The windows? No, much too narrow. Was there a back door?

I like how you foreshadowed Muffins being trapped in a box like this by mentioning the narrow windows earlier.:fluttershyouch:

A cutesy princess outfit, complete with frills, lace, puffy sleeves, and short skirt, was waiting for her. Four silky socks, a tiara, and a plastic fairy wand also floated into view nearby.

Awwww!:raritystarry:

“Don’t worry, sweetheart. You’ll look positively adorable in this.”

Yes she will. She most certainly will.:eeyup:

It was lined with strollers, baby bouncers, cribs, and more. But no matter how hard Derpy looked, there wasn’t a door or a wide enough window to be seen.

There's no way out Muffins!:raritycry:

Suddenly she went completely blind. She flinched, her head surrounded by something soft as it slid down on top of her. Fabric was being pulled over her head, the dress no doubt.

Caught! And soon to be so much more adorable!:yay:

Derpy struggled and screamed into her pacifier as she continued to suckle, but the dress made its way onto her body without much effort.

There's no fighting it Muffy! You're going to look cute and that's that!:pinkiecrazy:

The comfortable silky feeling of it was impossible to deny. If Derpy hadn’t been panicking so much right now, she might’ve found some enjoyment in the way the dress hugged her body, even if it pinned her wings to her side.

That's it sweetie! Get nice and comfortable!:twilightsmile:

The prissy princess outfit was as humiliating as the diaper! What’s worse, the skirt of the dress was so short that it left her padded rear completely exposed. It called more attention to the fact that she was in a diaper, not less!

As it should be.:ajsmug:

Derpy’s eyes widened in fear and she waddled double-time. About two steps later, the stroller booped her in the rear, knocking her back so she fell right into the seat.

Her bottom sank into the diaper’s padding just as the diaper sank into the seat. Derpy was about to stand up, but suddenly the strollers fasteners zipped around and clicked in place over her waist.

She struggled, trying to jump out. Each time the stroller’s seat belt caught her and jerked her back into place.

The fairy wand floated forward and landed in one Derpy’s waiting hooves. She tried to shake it free, but found it too was stuck to her sock.

Your throne and scepter madam!:rainbowwild:

The ghost tilted its head, tsking at her sopping diaper. “Wet already, sweetheart? And we just got ready to go.” It spoke with Tender Love’s voice...

It just occurred to me you never actually specified which tribe Tender Love belongs to.:unsuresweetie:

The lack of such a description suggests earth pony, but it would be pretty humorous if she was a Unicorn, as that would explain the poltergeist shenanigans.:duck:

Derpy whined as they oriented themselves toward Ponyville. The scariest night of her life was also about to become her most embarrassing.

Everyone else: "I feel bad for Muffins about to be humiliated.":fluttershbad:

Me: I feel bad that Tender Love dropped dead from unknown circumstances, and has been on her own in this store for who knows how long.:fluttershysad:

At least she has company now. And such a cutie too!:pinkiehappy::heart:

As she shifted in her squishy diaper, the warm and damp pee clinging to both the padding and her fur, she just silently begged that somepony would help her out after they finished laughing at her.

That's assuming people recognize you, and assume to think you're there against your will.:derpyderp1:

More likely, they'll let Tender Love take her new baby home.:pinkiesad2:

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