why do I have feeling the ai will infect and control the whole castle and diaper rest of twilight friends, spike, starlight, the CMC, then the other princess till it expance to all the planet
Well this is interesting always love those automated nursery, I hope this is going to be a lot of fun for her and for anypony who gets lured by this. Keep it up.
Very interesting. You leave us teased on what the other doors may contain along with the prospect of how the AI may have learned a bit more than Twilight ever would've expected.
For me, I see this as a classic Twilight mistake. She gets so excited about her ideas that she can often neglect a detail in which could result in a massive 'whoops!'. (Kind of like almost everything she did with Cozy Glow in Season 8 up until the end)
Nice job with letting us know how Twilight's sleepy stupor resulted in her not closing the secret passage. You did it so early in the chapter. All the other aspects of the tale from that point can make it easy for us, the readers, to forget the mistake as much as Twilight forgetting to cover her tracks.
You also did well to provide a degree of understanding why Twilight may have such a get away in her castle. Providing a justification always makes stories like this more enjoyable as it isn't just 'she digs diapers and being babied'. Having something to work with provides depth to the tale.
9234638 It's good to see you've found a lot to chew on with just the first chapter. There certainly was a lot of set up going on in this chapter, but with that out of the way the next chapter is free to really pick up going forward.
Loving it so far! Although, I still wanted Twilight to reach her objective of sleeping in her crib with her poopy diaper. Well, maybe she will have another opportunity, IDK.
Love where it's going so far!
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That's good to hear! Sadly, I don't think Twilight is as excited.
why do I have feeling the ai will infect and control the whole castle and diaper rest of twilight friends, spike, starlight, the CMC, then the other princess till it expance to all the planet
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Probably cause Twilight is known to mess up pretty badly from time to time.
Well this is interesting always love those automated nursery, I hope this is going to be a lot of fun for her and for anypony who gets lured by this. Keep it up.
EEE!!! I love Nannybots/Machine babying things!
LOVE IT!!! ^_^
9233725
Oh, it's going to be fun alright.
9233744
Ah, I see you're a pony of taste.
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true, be funny to have it do it to discord make him powerfuless
I'm sorry, Twilight, but i'm afraid I can't let you do that.
Very interesting. You leave us teased on what the other doors may contain along with the prospect of how the AI may have learned a bit more than Twilight ever would've expected.
For me, I see this as a classic Twilight mistake. She gets so excited about her ideas that she can often neglect a detail in which could result in a massive 'whoops!'. (Kind of like almost everything she did with Cozy Glow in Season 8 up until the end)
Nice job with letting us know how Twilight's sleepy stupor resulted in her not closing the secret passage. You did it so early in the chapter. All the other aspects of the tale from that point can make it easy for us, the readers, to forget the mistake as much as Twilight forgetting to cover her tracks.
You also did well to provide a degree of understanding why Twilight may have such a get away in her castle. Providing a justification always makes stories like this more enjoyable as it isn't just 'she digs diapers and being babied'. Having something to work with provides depth to the tale.
Nice job!
While I love machines turning on their creators, god damn it if I don't really like AB themes
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It's good to see you've found a lot to chew on with just the first chapter. There certainly was a lot of set up going on in this chapter, but with that out of the way the next chapter is free to really pick up going forward.
Loving it so far! Although, I still wanted Twilight to reach her objective of sleeping in her crib with her poopy diaper. Well, maybe she will have another opportunity, IDK.
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She probably will. And it probably won't be her choice then either
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I hope Trixie get join the fun soon. and maybe it be good chance for twilight and Trixie become better friend?
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Trixie will get her turn. And she and Twilight will get pretty close from the experience... in a way.
Liked the first chapter! Excited for more!
9241089
That's great to hear, cause more is coming... eventually
I'm down with this. I just wish the diapers weren't changed.
9241500
There'll be plenty more diapers in the future to soil, trust me
I don't know what to say aside from the fact that you somehow managed to top three of a kind with one chapter. God Damn.
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I'll take that as a good sign.
So far so good!
I like the set up! It's interesting and you've got my attention, looking forward to more :D
Didn’t the nursery say it would give her a bath?