Starlight and Trixie are being too harsh on Twilight, especially Trixie. They’re acting like Twilight did this to them and that she did it on purpose when the fact is that they both got themselves into this mess by not listening. The only thing Twilight is guilty of is building the nursery in the first place.
As for how to keep Trixie quiet, well Twilight is a princess, she could easily threaten Trixie if she wanted to. Really there’s no reason she shouldn’t.
9396224 They're going through a lot right now, might take them a bit of time before they ease up on Twilight is all.
As for Twilight using her status to threaten Trixie, that might be a little harsh in it's own right Then again, she may not have a choice by the end of this.
9396251 And like I said it’s not like she doesn’t have it coming to her right now. Honestly if someone’s being a dick to me I won’t hesitate to treat them the same way.
9396307 Well if she got mad enough she might. Heck her anger caused her to say something she regretted in the movie so I don’t think threatening someone is that far out there.
Wow! This chapter definitely did a superb job of illustrating everyone's feelings about the situation. You totally nailed Trixie. It took no effort to see her responding to each situation. Each word she said, or muffed, was spot-on Trixie. Great job!
I also like how Starlight is keenly aware of how Twilight 'got off' on her. She's 'trying' to behave herself about it but you wrote her reactions and statements in such a way that you know every pony is lucky she has that inhibitor ring. With how Starlight's emotions fuel her magic, I'd imagine she'd have generated a ethereal, nuclear explosion given how far things have gone.
Ah! I wondered if the special door would come up again. It's such a tease. No doubt it will be entered but by who and when?
Where will things go next? Will Starlight start to jab at Twilight for allowing them to stay in this situation? She definitely caught on and Twilight couldn't hide it enough to hold back what will most certainly be a massive outrage. Starlight will likely get as angry as she did when she was exposed in 'Our town' and then some.
9396788 Yeah, this chapter was a lot of character stuff. Just kinda needed to after so much happened last time and all. Glad to see you still like where it's going. I promise that special door is going to have a pay off... eventually.
I was hoping for Trixie get to baby twilight for a little bit. but I be laugh if Trixie was able to hero the to save them by overload the ring! plus those firework could do damage to the robots or cuase fire to make the robot get them out the nursery.
9396904 I'll probably still reply to his comments anyway, I make an attempt to reply to most people.
9396995 There's certainly a lot of things Trixie can do to help out, but she'll have to calm down a little bit first. No way the nursery would take a ring off such a fussy baby.
9397418 poor Trixie . I hope she get have little bit of friendship start with twilight somewhere. even if trap like fussy baby.
I truly seen part myself in side of Trixie the she showboat reminder me how I use to do almost on day basic in hoping to make friends, which had grow out mostly.
I hope Trixie will be able get something out this exp. but and way keep good work up Wandering Pigeon. are one my author on fimfic!
Well, this was even better then all the other chapters before, loved the dress up scene for all of them, keep it up.
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Well she may not get to baby Twilight, but...
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Thanks a ton! That dress up scene was a bunch of fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it
Starlight and Trixie are being too harsh on Twilight, especially Trixie. They’re acting like Twilight did this to them and that she did it on purpose when the fact is that they both got themselves into this mess by not listening. The only thing Twilight is guilty of is building the nursery in the first place.
As for how to keep Trixie quiet, well Twilight is a princess, she could easily threaten Trixie if she wanted to. Really there’s no reason she shouldn’t.
9396224
They're going through a lot right now, might take them a bit of time before they ease up on Twilight is all.
As for Twilight using her status to threaten Trixie, that might be a little harsh in it's own right Then again, she may not have a choice by the end of this.
9396251
And like I said it’s not like she doesn’t have it coming to her right now. Honestly if someone’s being a dick to me I won’t hesitate to treat them the same way.
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That's fair, I just don't see Twilight being the same way
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Well if she got mad enough she might. Heck her anger caused her to say something she regretted in the movie so I don’t think threatening someone is that far out there.
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True, but the two scenarios are very different.
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I’m just saying it’s possible.
Wow! This chapter definitely did a superb job of illustrating everyone's feelings about the situation. You totally nailed Trixie. It took no effort to see her responding to each situation. Each word she said, or muffed, was spot-on Trixie. Great job!
I also like how Starlight is keenly aware of how Twilight 'got off' on her. She's 'trying' to behave herself about it but you wrote her reactions and statements in such a way that you know every pony is lucky she has that inhibitor ring. With how Starlight's emotions fuel her magic, I'd imagine she'd have generated a ethereal, nuclear explosion given how far things have gone.
Ah! I wondered if the special door would come up again. It's such a tease. No doubt it will be entered but by who and when?
Where will things go next? Will Starlight start to jab at Twilight for allowing them to stay in this situation? She definitely caught on and Twilight couldn't hide it enough to hold back what will most certainly be a massive outrage. Starlight will likely get as angry as she did when she was exposed in 'Our town' and then some.
9396788
Yeah, this chapter was a lot of character stuff. Just kinda needed to after so much happened last time and all. Glad to see you still like where it's going. I promise that special door is going to have a pay off... eventually.
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From what I understand he can’t actually read comments so there’s not much point in replying to him.
I was hoping for Trixie get to baby twilight for a little bit.
but I be laugh if Trixie was able to hero the to save them by overload the ring! plus those firework could do damage to the robots or cuase fire to make the robot get them out the nursery.
9396904
I'll probably still reply to his comments anyway, I make an attempt to reply to most people.
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There's certainly a lot of things Trixie can do to help out, but she'll have to calm down a little bit first. No way the nursery would take a ring off such a fussy baby.
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Fair enough.
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poor Trixie . I hope she get have little bit of friendship start with twilight somewhere. even if trap like fussy baby.
I truly seen part myself in side of Trixie the she showboat reminder me how I use to do almost on day basic in hoping to make friends, which had grow out mostly.
I hope Trixie will be able get something out this exp. but and way keep good work up Wandering Pigeon. are one my author on fimfic!
Pretty interesting but i would say great so far 👍
P.S. how much longer do you plan on going with this story?
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It still has quite a few chapters left. I'd say we are over the halfway point, but that could easily change depending on inspiration.
Im more for the embarrassment and such then the messy diapers, but I guess that’s just me. Still well written and such.
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Thanks! And there is more embarrassment to come, trust me.