This was a nice story, Pigeon, I enjoyed it. It was fun to see Rainbow and Daring acting like regressed foals, and it worked very well. Good job on this one, can't wait for more
7540893 Whoops, sorry I've adjusted the links now so they should go to a Googledocs sheet now. 7540975 Glad you enjoyed it! Here's hoping I can get more fics out soon.
7541182 Hey, hate to be that guy, but... found this in the rules page.
You may not have chapters exclusively hosted on an external site that are required for the understanding or enjoyment of the story. Users should be able to read through your story without having to leave the site.
Why don't you just publish those two chapters here, and link to each chapter instead of google docs?
7541202 That's a fair enough idea. The reason I didn't publish them in the first place was simply because I wanted to keep the choose-your-own ending part a secret, but sticking to the site rules is more important. Thanks for the help.
7541213 I understand completely. Also, I wouldn't say which chapter is the good end or bad end in the title. As soon as I clicked on the link I wanted, I was immediately told by the chapter title how the story would end.
Linking to unpublished chapters is against fimfiction's rules, but we can't access them because of the password anyways.
Daring Do ain't dealing with this curse no more!
This was a nice story, Pigeon, I enjoyed it. It was fun to see Rainbow and Daring acting like regressed foals, and it worked very well. Good job on this one, can't wait for more
7540893 Whoops, sorry I've adjusted the links now so they should go to a Googledocs sheet now.
7540975 Glad you enjoyed it! Here's hoping I can get more fics out soon.
7541182 You're welcome!
And I can't wait to read your future works!
7541182 Hey, hate to be that guy, but... found this in the rules page.
Why don't you just publish those two chapters here, and link to each chapter instead of google docs?
7541202 That's a fair enough idea. The reason I didn't publish them in the first place was simply because I wanted to keep the choose-your-own ending part a secret, but sticking to the site rules is more important. Thanks for the help.
7541213 I understand completely. Also, I wouldn't say which chapter is the good end or bad end in the title. As soon as I clicked on the link I wanted, I was immediately told by the chapter title how the story would end.
Chapters are linked backwards.