By George, it's competently written. I'll keep an eye on this and might check out your other stuff if you've managed to remain consistent. Color me interested.
She didn't want Rainbow to know she had the pacifier. Not out of embarrassment, but out of greed. It was hers, and if Rainbow knew she had it, there might be trouble. What if she tried to take it? Daring was not letting that happen.
Can't wait to see how Quiblle'll react to this new Daring Do story.
This was a nice start, Pigeon, I can't wait to see how this story'll continue.
7532890 Assuming Daring retains enough intellgience by the end of it all to write a book about it.
7532909 Rainbow Dash could write it for her, maybe the title could be "Daring Do: My Adventure As a Mentally Regressed Foal!"
7532918 Assuming Rainbow Dash doesn't fall victim to the curse as well.
7532919 True, but maybe she could write down what happens to her and Daring Do as their adventures continue?
7532927 Time will tell.
what? no mummy ? ....But I doo like the pacifier
By George, it's competently written. I'll keep an eye on this and might check out your other stuff if you've managed to remain consistent. Color me interested.
You've got the makings of a fun story here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
The One Pacifier......TO RULE THEM ALL!!
Soup? I think its a can with a spoon in it. Lol
quite an interesting start to this story