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Wandering Pigeon


I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...

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I look forward to all the degenerate stuff from you. :raritywink:

I can only imagine what a lord of chaos has is store for these three.

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It's going to be something special, that's for sure. Discord/Eris' powers give me so much freedom to get creative. Even more so than the automated nursery did.

Quite the interesting group of characters for this story, I'm interested to see if all of them being a different species will play a part.

One, probably stupid, question about Eris. Is this a universe where Discord is female, or is this the Eris introduced in the comics? The description and picture suggest not but I just want to make sure.

Looking forward to more from you!

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This is a universe where Discord is female. I added an AU tag now just for extra clarification.


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Gee, I wonder why :trollestia:

I'm loving this fanfic idea. I'm quite eager to see how this goes. I wonder how far Eris will take it. Well, these three hotheads are really in for it now.

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The certainly are. And they also have no idea quite what's coming.:raritywink:

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Fandom 2012:
-I love Eris.
-I love that genderbend of Discord too.

Fandom 2019:
-I love Eris.
-Which Eris?

I was right after reading chapter 1. This is turning out to be a real gem. Ending on some really good cliffhangers, too. Maybe a good old fashioned punishment session will put these grumpy babies in their place.

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Oh they're definitely in for it. :raritywink:

Whether or not it will actually help them... well, you'll just have to wait and see.

Do what you like but this teasing, subtle, and dominating nanny figure works very well, possibly better than obvious lewd, and was a lot of fun for me.

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Glad you like her! Don't worry, even when stuff gets lewder she won't change, so you'll always have that aspect to enjoy.

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I'm fine with lewd I was more talking about the way the chapter was written where it was kind of subtle lewd, and more playful, than obviously lewd.

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i agree, am loving this fic . the way eris is acting juxtaposed by her brutal spanking and then the humiliation of the feeding pushed so many great buttons. am eager to see where you go with regards to more lewd stuff wander and can't help but wonder if painfully large enemas will be involved at all~

Comment posted by Thunderchaser23 deleted Aug 16th, 2019

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I'm not entirely sure I understand. How does describing what's happening break immersion?

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Forgive my stupidity, I shouldn't be making comments while falling asleep haha.

My criticism is that I find you use "pooping, pooped, and poop" a lot. I know that you're describing what's going on, but using words like messing or filling intermittently adds some much needed variety! :twilightsmile:

Took me a while to get to this one. I'm still enjoying this a great deal. I'd LOVE to try out Eris's aromatherapy by the way. Seems like fun.

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Glad to hear you're still enjoying it. The aromatheraphy part was so much fun to write.

>That drew her attention to Eris, who had finally been allowed to move on from the star hole
-I think you meant to say 'Ember', since she's the one (forced)playing with the block shapes.

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Thanks for the catch. I ended up mixing up those two names a couple of times during the writing process, and I guess I didn't quite catch all of them.

She really is very harsh. Spanking Gilda extra because she didn't immediately use the word "nanny", overfeeding them and everything else.

They don't really seem to learn. They keep snarling at each other even after you say they have admitted defeat.

We need a sequel in witch eris does this to characters from other things

The fact that they don't learn though makes it feel a little pointless.

I would love a sequel where Eris continues the "Therapy" on Ember, Gilda and Limestone. Leading to her finally "Curing" them and end it on a cliffhanger where Eris "looks at the camera" and says "well their cured, who's next" with a mischievous grin

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