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TAW


Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?

Comments ( 154 )

Ignore that Poultron fag, Good job TAW keep it up :heart:

I fucking love you, TAW.

TAW, you have outdone yourself this time. :pinkiehappy:

>She gagged, almost choking, and realised she'd found her limit.

HORSES DON'T HAVE A GAG REFLEX. F-

Also, this magic horse dildo is exactly why lesbianism is so common in Equestria. Who needs a stallion when you have one of these incredible things?

806490
Watch, the deluxe model isn't sterile. =P

TAW

806490
THEY'RE MARSHMALLOW HORSES
THEY HAVE WHATEVER'S RELEVANT
I'M REPORTING YOU TO THE HORSE RATING BOARD!

I have to this was a really good clop, but one thing I need to ask. How did you get this idea this time?

woohoo! Another TAW clopfic! and this pairing...it interest me:rainbowwild:

I have to ask...how do you think this up?

...I actually had no idea who these two characters were. I had to look them up.

Anyway, sister incest is hot. Celestia/Luna?

why did you delete my comment you shit talkin bitch?

TAW

807436
They were two sisters* in Hurricane Fluttershy

*for fanon enough values of sister, but they look it

807431>>807410
CC and Flitter are /hot/

807445
because fuck you
that's
why

:megusta:
I like this one. Keep it up, my good writer. :pinkiehappy:

807453 Well that is true... ᵂᶦˢʰ ᵗʰᵃᵗ ʷᵃˢ ᵐᵉ⋅⋅⋅

you still spelled "honorable" wrong

807462 WHY YOU RAGIN'? CAPS LOCK!

Hey,

I'm at work, so I think this one's going to have to wait till I get home - naughty, naughty TAW.

JMH

TAW

807473
Ooh~

807462
uh
do the words artistic license mean anything to you

Magic dildo seriously well can't judge that beside is equestria anything is possible but anyway great story just amazing

I just realized TAW is WAT backwards.

807514 *gasp* It is the almighty foot!

I was beyond impressed with this fic. Good work:twilightsmile:

This clopfic. I like it.
ANOTHER! *slams fist on table*:flutterrage:

Haven't quite gotten around to reading I will when I'm alone *wink wink* but I just have to say I have been watching the flame war against you and the poltron fag and I have to say your fucking awesome TAW just reading the comments made me lol. Back to stories and such I agree with the one guy who sugested a pricest? Possibly? Please? Oh and poltron I doubt you have ever written anything good like TAW so just bug off and leave him alone your not doing anything then making your self look like an asshole

807453 Gotta love when admins talk shit don't you...

p.s. Nice work as always.

Story was appropriate TAW-level of quality.

Comment section is golden. :twilightsmile:

807577 you do realize they're friends and do this in the comments of basically every story Taw writes right?

All I have to say about this story is incest is wincest. :pinkiehappy:

Have a word I've never said before; Wincest

Another great story TAW.
806490
I keep telling writers this but nopony ever listens :twilightangry2:
Plus it's totally gross when women gag on a dick anyway:raritydespair:, and porn is terrible for doing this exact thing on a regular basis... what guy wants to worry about if a woman is going to toss her lunch on his lap?:raritydespair:

where'd did they come from the icons of them?

That was excellent :pinkiehappy: another great work!

me -------> gusta

I must say it was quite a good read. :pinkiehappy:

> that summary
> sex "doesn't count"
> mfw :ajbemused:

Constructive criticism later, silly academic stuff is keeping me from my pones.

807978

hey now some people may like that....:pinkiesick: just saying.... I still not big on F/F but this was OK

on to a topic I HAVE NO GROUNDS ON!

Poultron you and TAW just need to fuck, there I said what we all thinking AN HERO THIS SHIT!

It isn't incest. It doesn't count between sisters!

I sometimes wonder about authors, but hey? If a story keeps me reading, then it's good by any standards.


807462

Subliminally trolling while undermining the author at the same time. Genius!

806490 Technically, they're ponies. :twilightsmile:

807479

'kay, I'm turning the rating on 'Madame Butterfly' back down. That's a 'mature' fanfiction, right there. Yeeouch. With sisters it doesn't count, huh? That's, like, adolescent hormone doublethink talking, I think.

Anyway, really well written, and, um... I enjoyed it :twilightblush:

JMH

806490
Horses don't have wings, or MAGIC, either. Or, you know, sentience. Saying that they don't have a gag reflex is somewhat redundant at this point.

Magic horse dildo. Well, that's a new one.

Anyway, as amazing as ever, TAW. Awesome work here!

806490 According to the show, Ponies from Equestria can vomit (see Applebuck season, when AJ made the baked bads.) having a gag reflex doesn't sound too improbable given this.

glad you went with this idea, it turned out nicely
pacing was a little rushed for my liking, but still pretty unf
unf
unnnnnnnnnnnnf

TAW

808653
<3 <3 <3
I hope this makes up for that unfortunateness with Applejack. Any quick advice you could give on it?

808663
um, i dunno
mostly just that i would have languished over the setting of the scene rather than diving into the nitty gritty
the first kiss was written really well, i love that kind of electric tension before a kiss
but it does jump pretty straightforwardly into sexy times
which is cool, because it was good
i just feel like it might have lost some of the magic as a result of the rush
also the magical horsecock thing was cool, but it would likely be really fun and much more intimate/sexy to have the sisters exploring each others' bodies without the aid of a magical accessory
just taking more time to get to the exciting parts, or by virtue of that, making them more exciting as a result of pacing... it kind of loses some of the thematic conceit by jumping from the original premise to both girls being super hungry for sex. i mean, they can be that, but we need to believe it in contrast to the set up, right?

still was very good, enjoyed it a bunch

TAW

808680
That makes sense, I suppose it does lose a lot of the effect jumping into it so quickly. Something to keep in mind!

807978
I KNOW, BUT THEN ASSHOLES LIKE THIS GUY COME ALONG...

808393
YOU NEED TO DRAW THE LINE SOMEWHERE, MAN.

808618
IRRELEVANT.

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