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This story marks me attempting to write a bit more saucy stuff rather than obviously ironic and cringe-worth clop. Even if the clop is still cringe worthy do to my rather inexperienced state of mind, I hope at least I make it fuzzy-feeling.

Also, to make up for the lack of absurdity, I've hidden several references to MCR in the text. Also, first person to point out the song I reference in the title and chapter title wins. What do you win? Why, the satisfaction of being a winner and being better than the losers who aren't the winner!

The titles are a reference to Airbag by Radiohead. Totally didn't look that up on google. Nope.

Incomplete? As in more?

Hm. Hope you finish it. I like it so far.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2705386 Yesh, i hav acheevd viktorri!

REGI.

WE ARE RIFFING THIS TOGETHER.

The dryer was far better at seductive whispers then Flitter was.

I nearly choked to death when I read that.

Seriously though, good story.
There were a couple grammatical errors and overused sentence structures, but other than that, GJ! :pinkiehappy:

2705415 kay

2705430 care to point them out? I'm always looking to get better.

2705432 Nope?

Flitter and Cloudchaser are quickly becoming one of my favorite shippings...even though it's incest, I LOVE IT!

2705448 Fancy seeing you hear, brother.

2705443
There was one grammar error I saw, but for the life of me I can't find it again.

As for sentence structure:

Cloudchaser and Flitter stood for a moment, staring at each other.

I think that would sound better if it started with "The two sisters stood for a moment" instead.

By any chance is the title a reference to the Red Jumpsuit Apparatus song Damn Regret?

2705474 Alright, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks!

2705481 'fraid not.

In an interstellar burst,
I am back to save the universe.

oh bby, Radiohead is 2gud4me. Nice subtle reference.

However, it was severely muted by the fact that her paties covered the metal, and thus all Cloudchaser got was insidiously soft cloth instead of nice hard, warm metal.

THOSE FUCKING KRABBY PATTIES GETTING IN THE WAY OF SEXY TIMES!

The smaller of the two pegasi rubber her hooves on either side of her larger twin.

Flitter better get those rubber hooves checked out. Can't be healthy.

Redigar, kegsjtsjqloggashjenhsmqkisfmfuwh!!! :flutterrage::pinkiesick::moustache:

Cloudchaser felt the burning down below from bing cut off

While I knew it was a terrible search engine, I was unaware of its capability to ignite horse vagina.

:pinkiegasp: There is finally a Flitter/cloudchaser tag!!! And now I must use it.

My reaction to the first part can be explained in this one thread.
Fuckin' Saved.

I came for the dryer, and then I stayed for it, too.

2725252 Machines are excellent at many things.

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